If you can release the name of the person who requested it. (The one on sig?) I suggest they just pick an all out new design if they wouldn't allow it to be somewhere else, this is constructive critisism. Being stubbon and not changing it isn't exactly 'good' we're suggest benefits on how it can be better, I suggest they follow but if they don't choos to then fine, but I'm saying that the people who posted on what they think know a bit about properties of pictures, balance and equality are a key element, AKA -something original, Paladin Princess...How about Divine Lady or Queen of the Havens?- -Also the placement of character, and main title name. Usually in life 2+2=4 not 3, in this case it ='s 10...it's just not right. I suggest switching placement of the chars. with a different pose for the PLD, maybe the THF and RDM sitting down back to each other and the PLD standing guarding with a shield? It's just me, as I said, I'll mess with it tomarrow.
I hope neither artist or requestor get offended by this.