Had a creative outburst today...

[Alyada]

[edited for googling reasons - Aly]

 

[Raesylil]

MMMMMMmmmmm....what a twist!!!

Now I'm a bit creeped out ; ;

 

[Isollde]

O.O.. wow.. i liked it alot! good job

 

[Shyrra]

Nice story Jason, certainly very creepy. Nice twist at the end, heh. Good work '-'b

 

[Skanya]

Wow... nice twist i thougt it was gona be a nice little collage love story but i was wrong. Nice job though i realy liked it ^.^

 

[Alyada]

Thanks for the kind words everyone! I'm looking into ways to improve the story, so if you have any suggestions I'd like to know!

 

[Shyrra]

Needs more me.