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Uzor said:
oh, and Rage, I take great joy in your obvious seriousness of my "I'm a god" joke. I'm sick of playing God though.

Can we get back to you leaving the board in peace? I'm sure quite a lot of us are tired of watching emowl.
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? You thought I was....serious?

Wait....

Weren't you responding to my posts in the same "obvious seriousness" I was using?

I was having fun too, but if you give up then I guess that's it.
 
jamal said:
Each day you wake up with people pokin fun
No matter how much you try, you can't just turn and run
People don't realize how much it hurts when they say /wrists and the like
Your girlfriend probably left because after being with you she became a dike
Woe is you, woe is you, people should give you pity
You cry so much and post so sad you act like a depressed city
Maybe instead of acting like the world is out to always get ya
You should stop actin so emo, trust me the world will let ya.
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Good try, but it would be better if you had close to the same amount of syllables in each line. Also, its not good to rhyme the same word with itself.
 
Rage said:
? You thought I was....serious?

Wait....

Weren't you responding to my posts in the same "obvious seriousness" I was using?

I was having fun too, but if you give up then I guess that's it.
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You thought I was serious in my fixing?

I'm well aware being a complete moron isn't your secret weapon. Its the way you live your life.
 
Ironmike said:
Good try, but it would be better if you had close to the same amount of syllables in each line. Also, its not good to rhyme the same word with itself.
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get ya
let ya

getcha
letcha

I wrote an emo-bleed poem in 5 seconds. Go troll elsewhere
 
Ironmike said:
Good try, but it would be better if you had close to the same amount of syllables in each line. Also, its not good to rhyme the same word with itself.
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Raps and songs does not require to rhyme, nor do they require the lines to have the same amount of syllables.
 
Oh, were that supposed to be a poem?

Well, I have to agree with Mike then sadly. However, I would still rate you A+ for your work compared to many other bleed-poems. And to think they can spend days working on one :p
 
Can we seriously stop talking to him?

I'm glad he got hit with a tomato, though. Old people are funny as hell.
 
Uzor said:
You thought I was serious in my fixing?

I'm well aware being a complete moron isn't your secret weapon. Its the way you live your life.
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You were the one who first accused me of being serious...unless you weren't being serious there, either?

Anyways, I thought that quoting your text would help you realize that was what I was referring to during that entire post...Clearly I was mistaken.

But to clarify no, I did not take you seriously at all.

The problem with the internet is, that you can't tell when someone is serious or not. The other problem, is that because of that, it leads to idiots like you trying to rank themselves in everyone's eyes as an almighty "owner".

"I wrote an emo-bleed poem in 5 seconds. Go troll elsewhere" - Jamal

That sentence itself is a troll.
 
I'm rather sure his original post was part of his secret weapon. The secret weapon being to make fun of us by making fun of himself.

Read:
It had an emotional effect, too, since I felt like I was bleeding inside and out.

Instead of going to get my donut I just fell down and went into the fetal position and just cried
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And to pity me.
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I got bruises.
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1:16

I came.
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Its called attempting to "get" others by agreeing with what they say, or making fun of yourself. Basically, agreeing with your opponent.

Sadly, that won't work. Its a way for you to hide behind yourself and not show your real self. By agreeing with what others say, you fulfill your own desires, and can smugly smile at your own witty remarks of self-inflicting pain.

that is no way to win a fight. However, it does amuse. Hence why I use it as jokes and comic relieves. Such as:

<Person> Wow, you're gay.
<Uzor> Yes, I do find you quite attractive.
 
Rage said:
You were the one who first accused me of being serious...unless you weren't being serious there, either?

Anyways, I thought that quoting your text would help you realize that was what I was referring to during that entire post...Clearly I was mistaken.

But to clarify no, I did not take you seriously at all.

The problem with the internet is, that you can't tell when someone is serious or not. The other problem, is that because of that, it leads to idiots like you trying to rank themselves in everyone's eyes as an almighty "owner".
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Wow, I underestimated you. It seems you finally realize my seriousness with this thread.
 
To clarify:

Your secret weapon = self-targeted sarcasm.

And as I said, I quite enjoy it.
 
Please, do enlighten me. It seems my scanner is broken in that case. Perhaps I require a version update.
 
Uzor said:
Please, do enlighten me. It seems my scanner is broken in that case. Perhaps I require a version update.
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I already told you that my secret weapon was my emo laser.
 
Fixed my emo-bleed poem. Iambic pentameter'd for your liking:
With each gasping breath I take under the sun
I know I’ll never be the chosen one
Because of this I’ll lead an emo life
Causing myself much pain and tons of strife
I’ll lash out at those who attack my kin
Just wait till after I show them their sin
The emo-kind will be the kings of pain
Don’t on my dark black clothes leave any stain
Rappa and Jamal will burn you will see
Oh wait, I’m wrong, not them, but emo-me


Still only took 2 minutes instead of 5 seconds...
 
jamal said:
I wrote an emo-bleed poem in 5 seconds. Go troll elsewhere
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I was just offering advice to make your writing skills better. You'll never make it in this business if you can't take constructive criticism.
 
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