the balance between good and evil.

Myrrh

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Myrrh
Well here is my first short story, I used it in an english project and was proud of it so i wanted to share it with QCDN. Now there may be a few typos and what not so excuse any misstakes i make and please let me know if its a good story. Its a bit like FFXI and FFI and things aren't as strong as they would be ingame lol. Also i use my friends.


The year is 2210 A.D and we begin with a man named Myrrh. He had an ok life and his world was a peaceful one. Wars have stopped and every race was equal.

Myrrh woke up one day with a feeling that today was going to be different then any other day but he just shock it off and began his morning. First he showered then ate. He was getting ready for school when he heard a loud bamn noise. Myrrh ran outside to see what it was and he saw that people had weird weapons that made a noise then hurt someone from far away(a gun if you didn't guess lol). Now since Myrrh lived in a time without war and no weapons he had no clue what this was and ran inside.

Once Myrrh was inside he started to hear this ringing noise coming from his room. Myrrh slowly walked to his room trying to becareful and make sure no one was trying to hurt him. He opens his door and sees a light coming from his closet. He opened it with caution, only to see this weird looking devise. He bent down to pick it up. After he picked it up he noticed that the things around him were going in reverse and then he saw he house was being unbuilt and that the seasons went backwards. Now before he knew it, it all stoped and now he was in this forest like town with all these weird looking people around. Myrrh didn't know what to do and was scared to move. Then this little cat like girl came up to him and said "hello mister". Myrrh didn't know what to say so he just gave her a little wave. After about an hour of standing around debating about what to do he started walking around and then he noticed a Croud. He goes to see whats happening and sees a hurt man. Now Myrrh being the nice guy that he is ran to help the man. The man looked at Myrrh and said "Please help me, I was attacked by a dragon." Myrrh not knowing what to do looked at the mans wounds and before he knew it the man was ok and completly healed. The man turned to Myrrh and said "How did you do that? Only one person is able to do that and he isn't going to be born for another 2000 years or so our profits tell me." Myrrh in confusion just looks at the man.

The man then replies "Oh I'm sorry my name is King Athos. I am the ruler of this land that is called Windurst. And if you have the power to take away my wounds then you must be the hero of time Named Myrrh that my profits told me would come one day and save the land."

King Athos and Myrrh walk around Windurst for hours and King Athos explains everything to Myrrh "You see Myrrh my Profits have told me about yourself and 3 others that would save the land from the dragon that is throwing off the balance between good and evil all threw out time. The other Heroes are in 3 other countrys of this world. One is at the great city of Jeuno, Another is in the city Of San'doria, and the last hero is in the town of Bastok."

They get to a huge tree. The King says "here Myrrh take this gold and armour and this Hammer. Only you can weild it. Also take this Magic book that my profits made for you, it has all the knowledge of our world in it. Use it when you need help it also has the power to speak." The king then leaves into the tree. Myrrh starts walking around and sees a shop. Myrrh enters out of curioisity and the clerk says to Myrrh "Hey buddy, i heard of you. You’re that hero of time aren't you? That ultimate healer i'm told. Yeah well without these spells you can never heal anything." Myrrh opens the book and listens to what it says "Myrrh he is right you need spells inorder to heal but most of them you can not use till you become stronger." The clerk interupts the book "get stonger by defeating the monsters that lie outside of the towns but becareful some are too strong." So Myrrh buys all the scrolls he can carry and puts then in his backpack.

Myrrh leaves the store and wanders for a little bit and then he hears someone yelling his name. "MYRRH WAIT...... MYRRH." It was this little kid or so it seemed. Myrrh stops and lets the little kid catch up. Myrrh waves as the kid gets near. The kid says "*pant, pant* gezzy weezy Myrrh your hard to findo windo. I am the kingy wingys assintant. He forgot to give you this" He hans Myrrh a Map. "That Myrrh is a magic Maparu. It knows where the other Heroes are and you can never get lost as long as you have it". The kid then bows "Thank you Myrrh for saving our Kingaru and i wish you the best of luck on your questaru."

Myrrh looks at the map and it shows him where to go to leave the town. Myrrh leaves the town and sees a weird plant like creature. Myrrh opens the book and it says "That Myrrh is a Mandragora it is nice and weak. It’s a good monster for your first fight". So Myrrh draws his hammer and begins to strike the Mandy. But Myrrh didn't expect the monster to hit so hard and Myrrh's arms begins to bleed badly. Myrrh deals a hard blow to the monsters head and it falls. Myrrh's arm is nearly broken and he can barely grab the book to see if there is anything he can do to make it better. The book says "Myrrh can't you feel your new power? Well look at your spells you will know what I mean." Myrrh opens his backpack and sees a scroll glowing? He grabs it and opens it up, he reads it and it says Cure lvl 1. Then in a puff of smoke the scroll disappears. The book replies "Myrrh that spell lets you heal wounds that aren't too bad. Go ahead give it a try. Just look at your wound and say the spell."

Myrrh looks at his arm and says "Cure" and before he knew it his arm was healed and felt as good as new. Now Myrrh continues North like the map showed him. As Myrrh is walking he starts to think about his time and what’s happening to the people there. While Myrrh is in deep thought he bumps into a weird bird like creature. The bird shouts "GWAAAAAA!" and starts attacking Myrrh. Myrrh quickly draws his hammer and starts attacking the bird. Myrrh starts getting bad cuts from the weird bird. So Myrrh uses his new spell while in battle. And now he is at full strength while the bird is slowly dying. Soon the bird falls to the ground but drops an item. Myrrh picks it up and opens the book "Myrrh that is a light staff it has the power to make your cure spells better and can also deal magical damage called Light damage."

So Myrrh happy with himself smiles and was proud he did a good job. Our hero then continues north and comes to some mountains. Myrrh looks at the map and notices that one of the heroes are close. So he continues north towards his first companion. As our hero continues he comes to this giant caterpillar. He opens the book and listens "That Myrrh is a Crawler. If your careful you can defeat it and don't forget to use your know weapon."

So Myrrh uses his new weapon and starts hitting it but the crawler did not attack right away because it was stunned from the first attack. After Myrrh gets a few more hits in the crawler is no longer stunned and starts attacking Myrrh with fury. Myrrh keeps attacking and it is doing little damage and the Crawler is starting to take its tole on Myrrh But before the crawler could deal the final blow to Myrrh this weird bright light incases the Crawler. The light falls in on the crawler and it disappears. Myrrh's wounds are bad and for some reason his Cure spell is not working. He opens the book only to hear "Myrrh Magic is not infinite Your body can only use so much magic a day, so Now we must set up camp and rest for the night."

So Myrrh sets up camp. And sleeps for the night. Myrrh wakes up and sees he is back in his own time. He gets out of his bed and had that same feeling about the day not going to be right. Myrrh walks outside to see his best friends killing each other in a mad anger. He trys to stop them but he passes right threw them. Myrrh shouts "STOP!!!" and then wakes up and sees he is back in the mountains and it is daylight. Myrrh sits there for about 2 hours thinking about his friends and family back in his time and if they are ok. Myrrh thinks to himself "Okay Myrrh in order to save everyone we love we most get the other heroes and stop this."

So Myrrh gathers his things and sets off back north to the closest hero. Myrrh continues without any trouble and comes to a town called Jeuno. It’s a big town with lots of people. Myrrh has trouble getting threw all these people to the pos of the other warrior. After a while of following his map Myrrh comes to the archduke’s palace and trys talking to the guards to let him threw so he can meet his friend. Myrrh gives up and turns around only to hear "STOP! Wait other hero of time, come this way." Myrrh follows and just as he passes the guards that didn't let him pass he gives them the finger and smiles.

The man takes Myrrh to the Archdukes thrown room and says "Wait here I will be back shortly". So Myrrh stands around for about 10 min before thinking to see what the book has to say on this place. "This place Myrrh is the castle of the Archduke of Jeuno; he rules this land with an iron fist, but at the same time a kind heart. Be sure to pick up new armor while you are here Myrrh." The man comes back in with a big guy in robes and gold, following the big man is a little person with tight black clothes and two small knives in each hand. The man in the robes says "Hello Myrrh, I am the archduke of Jeuno. This little guy beside me is your new companion Lenneth. He is a master of Ninja.

"Hiya" says lenneth to Myrrh. Myrrh just gave lenneth a wave. "I guess ya don't say much do ya" says Lenneth. "Well I guess we are companions now aren't we" says Lenneth as he laughs. The archduke explains how he met Lenneth and Then the Archduke gave Myrrh a letter to give to the blacksmith of jeuno so Myrrh could get new armor. "The blacksmith is in Upper Jeuno Near the church. Now take your leave and complete your Journey."

Myrrh and Lenneth leave and head to Upper jeuno but before they leave the archdukes palace Myrrh once again gives the guards the finger and smiles.

They get to Upper jeuno and start looking for the church. After a while of wandering around they find the church and soon find the blacksmith. They enter the shop and the blacksmith says "Top of the morning to ye. I'm the humble blacksmith of jeuno, I can make any armor ya need... for a price anyway hahahaha." Myrrh hands the blacksmith the letter. "Ah damn with the armour you will need I coulda made some sweet cash, lucky your the heroes of time hahahha. Give me a day and I can have it made for you, you can stay in the hotel in Lower jeuno." So Myrrh and Lenneth take their leave.
 
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Myrrh said:
Too be continued as soon as my computer gets fixed -.- no one post here
Sorry to disobey your little rule here, but I just gotta say that's a really wicked story. Did you copy/paste from your original paper? lol, if so, I sure hope the teachers at Kelven don't mark too hard for spelling mistakes. Either way, like I said, that's a really killer story. Good job! <Thumbs up>
 
i retyped it all out from memory -.- I HAVE NOTHING TO DO
 
PART 2

Myrrh and lenneth wander around all of Jeuno. Just seeing the sites. Lenneth and Myrrh didn't talk too much during this time. After awhile of wandering around Myrrh bumps into this ugly little guy, Myrrh bows and the man says "sorry mate" and runs off. Lenneth and Myrrh get to the hotel and are ready for bed but when Myrrh tried to pay for the rooms he noticed all his money was gone. In a panic Myrrh checked all of his pockets with no luck. Then Lenneth said "Maybe that guy you bumped into took your money."

Myrrh punches the wall. Now Myrrh and Lenneth are running all around jeuno looking for the little ugly guy but with no luck. Finally after about 3 hours they see him for a distance, But just as they saw him, the man same them. He began to ran but with Myrrh pissed he threw his hammer at the mans leg and broke it. The man falls to the ground. Lenneth and Myrrh slowly walk up to him making the man worry. They get to the man and Lenneth says "Alright buddy give us back the money or..." the man interrupts "please don't hurt me I just needed food." Myrrh being the nice guy that he is healed the mans leg with his magic and bought the guy some bread and fruit. The man bows and says "I’m so sorry but I haven't eaten in days." Lenneth replies "Next time just ask. Cause you never know we would have gave you some food."

Lenneth and Myrrh take their leave of the poor man and get back to the hotel and pay for the rooms and get some sleep. Again Myrrh woke up back in his time and wondered which was real. He didn't know what to do so he took his shower and ate. He was heading for school and he smiled that nothing bad has happened yet. Everything goes normal and no one is getting hurt, but once Myrrh got to lunch hour he noticed that he started getting that feeling back that something wasn't right and before he knew it he lost all control in his body and started attacking his friends.

Myrrh kept shouting "Some one help me please I don't want to hurt people" but before he knew his best friend was on the ground not moving.....Then Myrrh woke up again back at the hotel and noticed he had tears in his eyes. He got up and looked out his window. "Its still dark out" he thought to himself. He sat at the window with a thousand thoughts going threw his mind.
Myrrh stayed up the rest of the night scared to go back to sleep.

Morning comes around and Lenneth comes in to wake him up but sees he is standing at the window. "Glad to see your up and about" says Lenneth. "Well let’s get to that blacksmith and get the armor... but first I’m hungry as hell. You want to get some food?" Myrrh nods. They both leave the hotel and find a tavern. "Well let’s see if we can get some grub in here" says lenneth. They both enter only to see drunks. They smelt food in the air and Lenneth asked the waiter "yo you got any grub here or what?" the waiter replies "ya I got ye grub.”


more to come...
 
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Because the evil was taking him over in the dream. I thought that was kind of given lol
 
its good but i see alot of spelling and grammar mistakes but i dont wanna get on that because i dont want to sound rude but i would suggest maybe running microsoft office and when done do like a spell and grammar check but overall really good story :)
 
Well there are mistakes cause i keep getting rushed when writing this damn thng thats why i haven't finished it i keep gettting kicked off -.-
 
Myrrh said:
Well there are mistakes cause i keep getting rushed when writing this damn thng thats why i haven't finished it i keep gettting kicked off -.-
Write it in word or somthing then paste it
 
STFU Marjade don't use your logic on me you know what happens when i use logic
 
Myrrh said:
STFU Marjade don't use your logic on me you know what happens when i use logic
yes yes, head explode, all that
 
There i got my computer back and fixed my MANY spelling errors lol
 
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