The Help Kelyon Thread because he needs his own thread.

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If you guys have been following my other thread that dealt with my life as of recent. This is a letter i am wanting to send to my ex boyfriend in a attempt to get back together. Any comments will help.


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Dear Justin,
I know you are going through a lot right now and you most likely have a lot on your mind, but I need to get this out there because I don’t want to lose anything I might get to have with you. I love you, I am sure of this fact. I love the way you do math problems to calm yourself. I love the way you play music in your head and play it out with your fingers. I love how you take walks just to take them. I love the way you make me feel. I love the touch of your skin. I love the softness of your lips when they get pressed against mine.

I feel as if we are almost made for each other. We just have so many common interest; Photography, movies, music, same taste in crude humor. I felt that we could talk about anything, and we did. (Most of the time that is) I can’t get you out of my head. I listen to songs and can’t help but think of you and I and how we sang them together and held those passionate minute long kisses and the melody goes across into the air. “I will not slow down until I make it back into your arms this time…” I will be doing random things, looking on my computer and seeing images of you from when we had photoshoots with one another using Photobooth heh, always makes me smile. Lying in my bed, wishing that you were still next to me with your arms around me so tight. I miss waking up in the morning and turning over to just see you and noone else. I miss the drives that we took together, Dan’s Rock on the first night we were together and how you gave me your jacket when I was cold. I miss how you comforted me through the dark times that I was going through when I was dealing with my mother.

I know you are picking up the pieces to your life right now, but I want to be there to put them together with you. I want back the long nights we had just sitting in the car, lying next to one another, heh us attempting to watch Superbad about 5 times. When we kissed you gave me shivers down my spine, from the first to the last. I know you don’t want an ear load of promises but I will give you one. If we get back together, which is what I would like. I promise that if I want out, I will not lie to you and I will not come back in a week. I will do it for the right reasons and the reasons would be my own. Not for my mom, dad, sister, Jesus, or anyone, only me. You made me so happy when I was with you. I miss you Justin more than these words can explain. Honestly, I think there is a lot more I want to say to you, to show you how sincere I am about you. I hope one day soon I can.




Love, Jamie









Please help the Kelyon.
 
Kelyon said:
If you guys have been following my other thread that dealt with my life as of recent. This is a letter i am wanting to send to my ex boyfriend in a attempt to get back together. Any comments will help.


_____________________

Dear Justin,
I know you are going through a lot right now and you most likely have a lot on your mind, but I need to get this out there because I don’t want to lose anything I might get to have with you. I love you, I am sure of this fact. I love the way you do math problems to calm yourself. I love the way you play music in your head and play it out with your fingers. I love how you take walks just to take them. I love the way you make me feel. I love the touch of your skin. I love the softness of your lips when they get pressed against mine.

I feel as if we are almost made for each other. We just have so many common interest; Photography, movies, music, same taste in crude humor. I felt that we could talk about anything, and we did. (Most of the time that is) I can’t get you out of my head. I listen to songs and can’t help but think of you and I and how we sang them together and held those passionate minute long kisses and the melody goes across into the air. “I will not slow down until I make it back into your arms this time…” I will be doing random things, looking on my computer and seeing images of you from when we had photoshoots with one another using Photobooth heh, always makes me smile. Lying in my bed, wishing that you were still next to me with your arms around me so tight. I miss waking up in the morning and turning over to just see you and noone else. I miss the drives that we took together, Dan’s Rock on the first night we were together and how you gave me your jacket when I was cold. I miss how you comforted me through the dark times that I was going through when I was dealing with my mother.

I know you are picking up the pieces to your life right now, but I want to be there to put them together with you. I want back the long nights we had just sitting in the car, lying next to one another, heh us attempting to watch Superbad about 5 times. When we kissed you gave me shivers down my spine, from the first to the last. I know you don’t want an ear load of promises but I will give you one. If we get back together, which is what I would like. I promise that if I want out, I will not lie to you and I will not come back in a week. I will do it for the right reasons and the reasons would be my own. Not for my mom, dad, sister, Jesus, or anyone, only me. You made me so happy when I was with you. I miss you Justin more than these words can explain. Honestly, I think there is a lot more I want to say to you, to show you how sincere I am about you. I hope one day soon I can.




Love, Jamie









Please help the Kelyon.
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It's a very well put together letter. The only problem I have with it is what I underlined; take it out. That'll put "I'm still not sure if I want to be with you" in his head. Just make that a silent promise to yourself.
 
Updated version with Luckis suggestion.


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Dear Justin,
I know you are going through a lot right now and you most likely have a lot on your mind, but I need to get this out there because I don’t want to lose anything I might get to have with you. I love you, I am sure of this fact. I love the way you do math problems to calm yourself. I love the way you play music in your head and play it out with your fingers. I love how you take walks just to take them. I love the way you make me feel. I love the touch of your skin. I love the softness of your lips when they get pressed against mine.

I feel as if we are almost made for each other. We just have so many common interest; Photography, movies, music, same taste in crude humor. I felt that we could talk about anything, and we did. (Most of the time that is) I can’t get you out of my head. I listen to songs and can’t help but think of you and I and how we sang them together and held those passionate minute long kisses and the melody goes across into the air. “I will not slow down until I make it back into your arms this time…” I will be doing random things, looking on my computer and seeing images of you from when we had photoshoots with one another using Photobooth heh, always makes me smile. Lying in my bed, wishing that you were still next to me with your arms around me so tight. I miss waking up in the morning and turning over to just see you and noone else. I miss the drives that we took together, Dan’s Rock on the first night we were together and how you gave me your jacket when I was cold. I miss how you comforted me through the dark times that I was going through when I was dealing with my mother.

I know you are picking up the pieces to your life right now, but I want to be there to put them together with you. I want back the long nights we had just sitting in the car, lying next to one another, heh us attempting to watch Superbad about 5 times. When we kissed you gave me shivers down my spine, from the first to the last. I know you don’t want an ear load of promises but I will give you one. If we get back together, which is what I would like. I love you, and I am not going to let anyone come between that ever again. Not my mom, dad, no one. You made me so happy when I was with you. I miss you Justin more than these words can explain. Honestly, I think there is a lot more I want to say to you, to show you how sincere I am about you. I hope one day soon I can.




Love, Jamie
 
Kelyon said:
Updated version with Luckis suggestion.


________

Dear Justin,
I know you are going through a lot right now and you most likely have a lot on your mind, but I need to get this out there because I don’t want to lose anything I might get to have with you. I love you, I am sure of this fact. I love the way you do math problems to calm yourself. I love the way you play music in your head and play it out with your fingers. I love how you take walks just to take them. I love the way you make me feel. I love the touch of your skin. I love the softness of your lips when they get pressed against mine.

I feel as if we are almost made for each other. We just have so many common interest; Photography, movies, music, same taste in crude humor. I felt that we could talk about anything, and we did. (Most of the time that is) I can’t get you out of my head. I listen to songs and can’t help but think of you and I and how we sang them together and held those passionate minute long kisses and the melody goes across into the air. “I will not slow down until I make it back into your arms this time…” I will be doing random things, looking on my computer and seeing images of you from when we had photoshoots with one another using Photobooth heh, always makes me smile. Lying in my bed, wishing that you were still next to me with your arms around me so tight. I miss waking up in the morning and turning over to just see you and noone else. I miss the drives that we took together, Dan’s Rock on the first night we were together and how you gave me your jacket when I was cold. I miss how you comforted me through the dark times that I was going through when I was dealing with my mother.

I know you are picking up the pieces to your life right now, but I want to be there to put them together with you. I want back the long nights we had just sitting in the car, lying next to one another, heh us attempting to watch Superbad about 5 times. When we kissed you gave me shivers down my spine, from the first to the last. I know you don’t want an ear load of promises but I will give you one. If we get back together, which is what I would like. I love you, and I am not going to let anyone come between that ever again. Not my mom, dad, no one. You made me so happy when I was with you. I miss you Justin more than these words can explain. Honestly, I think there is a lot more I want to say to you, to show you how sincere I am about you. I hope one day soon I can.




Love, Jamie
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Not sure if it's a gramatical error, but what's the one promise?
 
Fixed:


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Dear Justin,
I know you are going through a lot right now and you most likely have a lot on your mind, but I need to get this out there because I don’t want to lose anything I might get to have with you. I love you, I am sure of this fact. I love the way you do math problems to calm yourself. I love the way you play music in your head and play it out with your fingers. I love how you take walks just to take them. I love the way you make me feel. I love the touch of your skin. I love the softness of your lips when they get pressed against mine.

I feel as if we are almost made for each other. We just have so many common interest; Photography, movies, music, same taste in crude humor. I felt that we could talk about anything, and we did. (Most of the time that is) I can’t get you out of my head. I listen to songs and can’t help but think of you and I and how we sang them together and held those passionate minute long kisses and the melody goes across into the air. “I will not slow down until I make it back into your arms this time…” I will be doing random things, looking on my computer and seeing images of you from when we had photoshoots with one another using Photobooth heh, always makes me smile. Lying in my bed, wishing that you were still next to me with your arms around me so tight. I miss waking up in the morning and turning over to just see you and noone else. I miss the drives that we took together, Dan’s Rock on the first night we were together and how you gave me your jacket when I was cold. I miss how you comforted me through the dark times that I was going through when I was dealing with my mother.

I know you are picking up the pieces to your life right now, but I want to be there to put them together with you. I want back the long nights we had just sitting in the car, lying next to one another, heh us attempting to watch Superbad about 5 times. When we kissed you gave me shivers down my spine, from the first to the last. I know you don’t want an ear load of promises but I will give you one and just one. If we get back together, which is what I would like, I will make my own choices. I love you, and I am not going to let anyone come between that ever again. Not my mom, dad, no one. You made me so happy when I was with you. I miss you Justin more than these words can explain. Honestly, I think there is a lot more I want to say to you, to show you how sincere I am about you. I hope one day soon I can.




Love, Jamie
 
A letter like this is a Catch 22 pending what kind of personality your ex has since I have no prior knowledge concerning his persona, but this could be good and bad. The good would be that he at least has a concrete visual reminder of how much he means to you. The bad would possibly make him feel as though you are smothering him coming close to the lines of desperate which may lead him to distance himself from you some more. The truly raw letters, such as this, are very difficult in terms of getting it precise so I don't blame you for wanting to get some input for it.

In the end it never hurts that you tried and if it doesn't work out then you at the very least you put some effort into it. Best of luck to you in sorting this issue out.
 
After i stopped crying and started to talk to him. He informed me it wasn't me. He just is not ready to date anyone, maybe not for a while. So as of now we are just really really close friends.
 
Being friends is better than nothing and the possibility of a second episode coming about is rather common. Lord knows this is how it was for me with an ex of mine buuuuuut after round 2 we went our own way, more specifically I said, "GTFO!" lulz...
 
Usually how it works out depending on whether or not both parties are amicable.... and being drunk usually helps lol >_>;
 
YAY! This is going the be the LAST post in this thread. IT IS OVER!!!!! I talked to my mom today, i mean really talked. She told me EXACTLY what i needed from her. She said that it will take her some time, but she will love me regardless. OMG I want to dance in the rain or something. AHhhhhhhhh bliss.
 
You should call her on the phone and say "GG noob!"
 
That's good to hear, regardless of what they may do or say most parents always love their children in the end despite differences.
 
Thing is, she wants me to stay single. She said she is still hoping i find a girl, i explained to her there are two sides to a relationship, emotional and physical. Told her i can't have the physical
 
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