The Two Sentence Story!

Acutie

Acutie

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We've all seen them. We all know how they work. There may be a rule against them I'm unaware of, delete it if there is. Anyway in case someone doesn't know how this works allow me to explain.
Once the story gets going, started by yours truly, you get to add two sentences to it, and by two sentences I mean one or 2 complete thoughts or instances. Try not to derail, to throw the story into a whole new direction because you really don't have time to elaborate a whole shift in the story on your own. You can't follow up "And then the onslaught began." with "The laundry was almost done and Joejoe couldn't find his favourite shirt." Bad examples but you get the idea.
Try to keep things nice and simple, try not to drag a sentence on and the most important thing that will allow this to be nice and easy to follow is to try to end sentences as often as possible. Try to close thoughts as often as you can so someone can start another. Don't introduce new characters very often either, really complicates things.
So, let it begin and hopefully turn out decent. Oh, and try to use proper english. None of that "u" instead of "you" stuff. These things are hard to keep together as is.

Have fun :P
P.S. If this fails, just delete it, it needs a good following to make it worth while.
P.P.S. Oh and if you happen to post a reply that is almost on top of another's and they don't make any sense, whomever was below please edit it to fit the plot. It's a pain in the butt but if happens. I think that's everything..

~~~~~So it starts!~~~~~

"The dawn of a new day was closing in and the company was preparing for the next wave of Orcs, due to arrive within hours. they were exhausted and running out of supplies but their hearts were determined to rout the enemy.
 
"The dawn of a new day was closing in and the company was preparing for the next wave of Orcs, due to arrive within hours. They were exhausted and running out of supplies but their hearts were determined to route the enemy. They were throwin' around ideas of how to defeat the orcs. All of a sudden their fearless leader came up with the most incredible idea ever.
 
"The dawn of a new day was closing in and the company was preparing for the next wave of Orcs, due to arrive within hours. They were exhausted and running out of supplies but their hearts were determined to route the enemy. They were throwin' around ideas of how to defeat the orcs. All of a sudden their fearless leader came up with the most incredible idea ever. It involved releasing Orc prisoners, and letting the them fight over the ever dissapearing food supply. They would be destroyed without a single soldier lost!"
 
"The dawn of a new day was closing in and the company was preparing for the next wave of Orcs, due to arrive within hours. They were exhausted and running out of supplies but their hearts were determined to route the enemy. They were throwin' around ideas of how to defeat the orcs. All of a sudden their fearless leader came up with the most incredible idea ever. It involved releasing Orc prisoners, and letting the them fight over the ever dissapearing food supply. They would be destroyed without a single soldier lost! As the grizzled old gate guard undid the latch he shuddered. "I've got a bad feeling about this." he said.
 
The dawn of a new day was closing in and the company was preparing for the next wave of Orcs, due to arrive within hours. They were exhausted and running out of supplies but their hearts were determined to route the enemy. They were throwin' around ideas of how to defeat the orcs. All of a sudden their fearless leader came up with the most incredible idea ever. It involved releasing Orc prisoners, and letting the them fight over the ever dissapearing food supply. They would be destroyed without a single soldier lost! As the grizzled old gate guard undid the latch he shuddered. "I've got a bad feeling about this." he said. One Orc walked out of the prison and stared at the guard blankly as it walked past. He and his fellow knights escorted it out of San d'Oria.
 
The dawn of a new day was closing in and the company was preparing for the next wave of Orcs, due to arrive within hours. They were exhausted and running out of supplies but their hearts were determined to route the enemy. They were throwin' around ideas of how to defeat the orcs. All of a sudden their fearless leader came up with the most incredible idea ever. It involved releasing Orc prisoners, and letting the them fight over the ever dissapearing food supply. They would be destroyed without a single soldier lost! As the grizzled old gate guard undid the latch he shuddered. "I've got a bad feeling about this." he said. One Orc walked out of the prison and stared at the guard blankly as it walked past. He and his fellow knights escorted it out of San d'Oria.

Each orc prisoner released was to be bound in chains until arriving at the battlefield, for the knights could not risk having their plan backfire on them. At the moment, everything was going as planned as they brought the starving, confused orcs out into the open.
 
Coming along wonderfully :). Just like Trizzip did, make sure you form them into paragraphs when appropriate :P
 
definitely the auto pruning killing this forum. it isn't as active as some others so by the time someone might come along and read - it has fallen under the radar.
 
Well, it WAS a good idea. I already post on here though. Don't feel right posting more than once.
 
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