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I started this story a while ago, and I didn't even know we had a place we could post this kind of stuff. But anyway I'll just post the first chapter because I don't know it people will like the liberties I took with the FF XI storyline. So if ppl like it, I'll put more up, if not it'll just be on my PC lol. Hope you enjoy.
It was early in the morning as the first strands of sun began to climb over the hills of the Lufaise Meadows, and crawl slowly onto the face of Aaleel Elingval, as she sat meditating in the one place she enjoyed most in all the lands of Vana-diel. It had been many months since she along with the warriors of her Guild, the Bastokan High Elite defeated a power once thought unbeatable by those of the land. She thought back on her battle with Absolute Virtue, and she felt then that after defeating the God of Sea, that there was nothing more that she could accomplish as a warrior, but in the back of her mind she feels that there is still much that is unknown to her in this world. She had watched many of those close to her lay down their weapons for the last time because there were no more challenges to face, or battles to be fought. But in her mind she knows that there is something out there, she can feel it in her heart.
“But how can that be, there is no land left unexplored and no battles to be fought,” she said shaking her head, and looking to the sun which was rising slowly behind the hills.
“But in the depths of my mind I feel that there is more out there,” she added.
She closed her eyes once more and continued to meditate, before her calm was disturbed by the sounds of howls coming from the creatures native to the land. She sprang to her feet, and drew the ancient katana Unji and Syuji from her waist. Syuji was given to her by her father when she was but five years old, and she studied greatly the arts of the far east so that she may one day possess the skill to wield it. Once she had mastered the ways of the Ninja, she turned her eyes to the skill of the Ranger, so that she may know the land better then any other. She sprang down into the near vale, and ran to the top of the next hill where she saw a stampede of sheep and bugard running in fear. She ran quickly down the slope to try and see what had scared these creatures in such a manner, and as the cloud of dust settled to the ground she saw the form of a creature that she never thought she would see again.
“Byakko,” she screamed surprised as she drew back from the great Tiger God of the realm of what is known as Sky to the people of Vana’diel.
“Why have you left sky?” She asked, but the creature only responded to her in a tongue that she did not recognize.
“I do not understand,” she said shaking her head.
“Then I will speak the tongue of this land,” the tiger said, as it stepped towards her.
“Byakko, why have you left Sky and come to Land?” She asked again, as the Tiger remained silent and stared angrily at her.
“You speak the name of nothing but a shell of and vessel in the form of my kin, and you wear armor forged from its power, but your are ignorant of the power that created it,” the tiger said.
“You speak of the Haidate,” Aaleel said looking down to the armor upon her legs.
“But I do not know of the kin of which you speak, I thought that Byakko was singular in his creation,” Aaleel said.
“Your mind and your thoughts are narrow and without knowledge of that which lies outside you world, but soon you will have no choice but to see the power of things that are beyond you reckoning,” the tiger said before it roared and readied itself to pounce. Aaleel called upon the power she had learned in the far east, and she felt the energy of the mystic arts on Ninjitsu growing in her body, before she extended her hand and released four spheres of white light, which became mirror images of herself, and stood before her, as a clear light surrounded her body and she disappeared from sight.
“Hide behind you magic all you wish, but you cannot evade me forever,” the tiger said, as it tore into the images Aaleel had placed before her.
“And in your mind, you know that you cannot defeat me,” the tiger added.
Aaleel knew the creature’s words to be true, as her form became visible once more as the tiger tore threw the last of her shadows, and leapt upon her. She was able to parry the tiger’s strikes with her katana for a time, but the power and the speed of the beast was too much for her, and knocked Unji from her hand with one of its claws and struck her with the other. The armor of Ninja was not thick, nor was it intended to turn the path of a blade, and the claws of the great tiger forced their way through and pierced her skin. She fell to the ground clutching her side, and looking up as the beast stood above her. The beast pinned her down with its front paw, and dug its claws into her chest. Aaleel slide her hand into her pouch and gripped her connection stone, which allowed her to communicate with all those she had grown close to, who had received a fragment from the same stone which hers belonged to. She called out for help, but she did not have the strength to focus enough to know if anyone heard her thoughts.
“I will watch you die slowly,” the tiger said.
“You or no other of this land will come to the aid of the ancient ones,” the tiger added.
Journey to Theallis
The Realm Beyond Sea, Sky and Land
The Realm Beyond Sea, Sky and Land
It was early in the morning as the first strands of sun began to climb over the hills of the Lufaise Meadows, and crawl slowly onto the face of Aaleel Elingval, as she sat meditating in the one place she enjoyed most in all the lands of Vana-diel. It had been many months since she along with the warriors of her Guild, the Bastokan High Elite defeated a power once thought unbeatable by those of the land. She thought back on her battle with Absolute Virtue, and she felt then that after defeating the God of Sea, that there was nothing more that she could accomplish as a warrior, but in the back of her mind she feels that there is still much that is unknown to her in this world. She had watched many of those close to her lay down their weapons for the last time because there were no more challenges to face, or battles to be fought. But in her mind she knows that there is something out there, she can feel it in her heart.
“But how can that be, there is no land left unexplored and no battles to be fought,” she said shaking her head, and looking to the sun which was rising slowly behind the hills.
“But in the depths of my mind I feel that there is more out there,” she added.
She closed her eyes once more and continued to meditate, before her calm was disturbed by the sounds of howls coming from the creatures native to the land. She sprang to her feet, and drew the ancient katana Unji and Syuji from her waist. Syuji was given to her by her father when she was but five years old, and she studied greatly the arts of the far east so that she may one day possess the skill to wield it. Once she had mastered the ways of the Ninja, she turned her eyes to the skill of the Ranger, so that she may know the land better then any other. She sprang down into the near vale, and ran to the top of the next hill where she saw a stampede of sheep and bugard running in fear. She ran quickly down the slope to try and see what had scared these creatures in such a manner, and as the cloud of dust settled to the ground she saw the form of a creature that she never thought she would see again.
“Byakko,” she screamed surprised as she drew back from the great Tiger God of the realm of what is known as Sky to the people of Vana’diel.
“Why have you left sky?” She asked, but the creature only responded to her in a tongue that she did not recognize.
“I do not understand,” she said shaking her head.
“Then I will speak the tongue of this land,” the tiger said, as it stepped towards her.
“Byakko, why have you left Sky and come to Land?” She asked again, as the Tiger remained silent and stared angrily at her.
“You speak the name of nothing but a shell of and vessel in the form of my kin, and you wear armor forged from its power, but your are ignorant of the power that created it,” the tiger said.
“You speak of the Haidate,” Aaleel said looking down to the armor upon her legs.
“But I do not know of the kin of which you speak, I thought that Byakko was singular in his creation,” Aaleel said.
“Your mind and your thoughts are narrow and without knowledge of that which lies outside you world, but soon you will have no choice but to see the power of things that are beyond you reckoning,” the tiger said before it roared and readied itself to pounce. Aaleel called upon the power she had learned in the far east, and she felt the energy of the mystic arts on Ninjitsu growing in her body, before she extended her hand and released four spheres of white light, which became mirror images of herself, and stood before her, as a clear light surrounded her body and she disappeared from sight.
“Hide behind you magic all you wish, but you cannot evade me forever,” the tiger said, as it tore into the images Aaleel had placed before her.
“And in your mind, you know that you cannot defeat me,” the tiger added.
Aaleel knew the creature’s words to be true, as her form became visible once more as the tiger tore threw the last of her shadows, and leapt upon her. She was able to parry the tiger’s strikes with her katana for a time, but the power and the speed of the beast was too much for her, and knocked Unji from her hand with one of its claws and struck her with the other. The armor of Ninja was not thick, nor was it intended to turn the path of a blade, and the claws of the great tiger forced their way through and pierced her skin. She fell to the ground clutching her side, and looking up as the beast stood above her. The beast pinned her down with its front paw, and dug its claws into her chest. Aaleel slide her hand into her pouch and gripped her connection stone, which allowed her to communicate with all those she had grown close to, who had received a fragment from the same stone which hers belonged to. She called out for help, but she did not have the strength to focus enough to know if anyone heard her thoughts.
“I will watch you die slowly,” the tiger said.
“You or no other of this land will come to the aid of the ancient ones,” the tiger added.
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