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for ppl who known im wrighting a fantasy story... here is the next chapter.
Chap. 4 Friend
Shaw and her fox friend has came to a trail on the edge of the forest. She thought of what way to go, then she looked at the fos and he started to head down the path wehre the sun was setting. They started walking down the path, and Shaw woundered what to call the lil fox. She thought for awhile, and the only name she could think of was Ren. Shaw looked down and said the name again to the lil fox, and he purked up.
It was getting dark, and they needed a place to sleep for the night. They kepted on walking toward the sunset while shaw looked around for a sheltered area. After awhile, they came across a rock formation. Some of the rocks was slanted enought for them to take shelter under. She went in to look it over, and said "Well, its not home, but it will do."
Before all the light was gone, She went out and gathered some brush to make a fire. She got enought to make a fire. When she got done building it, she relized that she didnt know how to make a fire. She leaned back againts the rock wall, pulled her legs in and sighed deaply. "We'll, looks like we are not gonna have a nice warm fire to keep us cossy tonight." Shaw said to the lil fox.
Then after a little time has passed, Ren sat infront of the pile of wood, stareing at one point. Shaw was watching the lil fox acting strangly. Then Ren raised his lil red paw and smacked down onto the wood, and there was a spark and the wood cought on fire. Shaw just sat there amazed, alot of thought's rushed thru her head but one just came to mind, {I wanna know how to do that} The lil fox looked up at Shaw and walked over to her, and curled up next to her to be safe, Shaw just sat there, lookin at Ren, woundering how he started the fire. She placed her hand on Ren, and stared back at the fire. She looked and looked, thinking, and she fell asleep on the thought of the mystery of Ren.
Mourning came around, and the light came thru the crack in the rocks. A stream of light glared into Shaw's eyes. She squint and stretched as she gets up and about. Shaw rubed her lil eyes, and stretched her tail. She looked around to see her surroundings, and for Ren.
Ren came in thru the lil crack at the entrence, and looked up at Shaw and just stared at her. Shaw never noticed that Ren had bright red eyes. the color of crimson blood. When shaw looked in them, she felt relaxed but scared at the same time. After some time, Shaw got a shiver down her back and turned away from Ren.
Ren gave a motion to Shaw to follow her outside. Shaw got up, moved the bundle away from the entrance and followed the lil fox to the woods for a short distance. They came up to a lil stream that's next to a meadow that's just like the one her family and friends played in. Shaw sat down next to the stream, listening to the water trickle down the way.
She rememered all the fun time's she had. Her and her friends were running thru the field, tossing a ball to each other. Picking flowers, braiding them togather to make a crown and gave them to there parents. Shaw's mother smiled and huged her after she placed the flower crown on her head, and her father gringed, huged, and patted shaw's head and told her go go back and play with her friends.
thats how far i got.. dam wrighters block >< hard to get all details of life when i know the plot...:shok:
Chap. 4 Friend
Shaw and her fox friend has came to a trail on the edge of the forest. She thought of what way to go, then she looked at the fos and he started to head down the path wehre the sun was setting. They started walking down the path, and Shaw woundered what to call the lil fox. She thought for awhile, and the only name she could think of was Ren. Shaw looked down and said the name again to the lil fox, and he purked up.
It was getting dark, and they needed a place to sleep for the night. They kepted on walking toward the sunset while shaw looked around for a sheltered area. After awhile, they came across a rock formation. Some of the rocks was slanted enought for them to take shelter under. She went in to look it over, and said "Well, its not home, but it will do."
Before all the light was gone, She went out and gathered some brush to make a fire. She got enought to make a fire. When she got done building it, she relized that she didnt know how to make a fire. She leaned back againts the rock wall, pulled her legs in and sighed deaply. "We'll, looks like we are not gonna have a nice warm fire to keep us cossy tonight." Shaw said to the lil fox.
Then after a little time has passed, Ren sat infront of the pile of wood, stareing at one point. Shaw was watching the lil fox acting strangly. Then Ren raised his lil red paw and smacked down onto the wood, and there was a spark and the wood cought on fire. Shaw just sat there amazed, alot of thought's rushed thru her head but one just came to mind, {I wanna know how to do that} The lil fox looked up at Shaw and walked over to her, and curled up next to her to be safe, Shaw just sat there, lookin at Ren, woundering how he started the fire. She placed her hand on Ren, and stared back at the fire. She looked and looked, thinking, and she fell asleep on the thought of the mystery of Ren.
Mourning came around, and the light came thru the crack in the rocks. A stream of light glared into Shaw's eyes. She squint and stretched as she gets up and about. Shaw rubed her lil eyes, and stretched her tail. She looked around to see her surroundings, and for Ren.
Ren came in thru the lil crack at the entrence, and looked up at Shaw and just stared at her. Shaw never noticed that Ren had bright red eyes. the color of crimson blood. When shaw looked in them, she felt relaxed but scared at the same time. After some time, Shaw got a shiver down her back and turned away from Ren.
Ren gave a motion to Shaw to follow her outside. Shaw got up, moved the bundle away from the entrance and followed the lil fox to the woods for a short distance. They came up to a lil stream that's next to a meadow that's just like the one her family and friends played in. Shaw sat down next to the stream, listening to the water trickle down the way.
She rememered all the fun time's she had. Her and her friends were running thru the field, tossing a ball to each other. Picking flowers, braiding them togather to make a crown and gave them to there parents. Shaw's mother smiled and huged her after she placed the flower crown on her head, and her father gringed, huged, and patted shaw's head and told her go go back and play with her friends.
thats how far i got.. dam wrighters block >< hard to get all details of life when i know the plot...:shok: