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Flymop said:
This thread is becoming just an awesome amount of drivel so ill be closing it up end of tommorow.
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lol right when i actually come in with a challenge and start winnin, how convenient!
what happened to hes not hurtin anyone leave em alone!
lolz
this thread was destined to be drivel from day one!
 
I wont shut it as long as theres no more random flames or rants. Comments/Constructive critism or other lyrics are the only things now allowed in this thread.

Anything else, pm the person dont post it here.
 
but am i allowed to comment before my lyrics? like i previously had done, since thats comments followed with something to back it up with what the thread is for , lyrics.
hope that made sense lol.
 
Chasym said:
Lol, id read all that but it has no form, i dont even think its english. its like an endless string of words that just happen to rhyme.
i can do that to.
fool, cool gonna make you drool till you form a pool its time for school all dressed in wool, the fat cat sat on the rat the rat went splat and that was that i got my bat out of a vat of acid in lake placid.
lolz look at me im cass! let us continue.

So i heard you found your raps in a garbage bag,
in a dumpster behind kinkos under a diaper rag.
Your like a heterotroph alone without the electric power of the light.
Your just a poster child for Emcees suffering from lyrical strife.
I think you and your rhymes need to seek perseverance,
Cause i saw your raps at wal-mart marked down for clearance.
The only thing you can spit is words in abbreviation,
Dont got time to spell it out with all that masturbation.
You Can't even spell "Faggot" actin like your all cool.
I dont think anyone would disagree here who needs to get "Schooled".
So go ahead and "tame it" cause its like a wildfire,
Until your shit make sense i think you should retire.
You see im using a rhyming scheme i learned back in english class,
And it seems to be workin cause i confused your ass.
I've had more orgasms than your five fingers could ever achieve,
I know your gaspin for air now, Go ahead and dry heave.
I bet you thought you dropped me a bomb, Its too bad you missed the hit.
Chasym for the win.
I sunk your battle ship.
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hahah.. finally, someone that says somethin back.. but we have 2 different styles.. yours is more set in form, followin a AABBCCDD pattern, while mine doesnt.. its flows, and has punchlines and metaphors, but isnt set in what u would find in a 'standard' english class, cuz it uses ebonics n slang, which is the hype of Freestyle'n.. mines suited for it, and yours is suited for a poetry contest Lol ...similar to yours.. but yea.. i like mine better, lemme get personal ..

yo Chasym, i went to yo site, despite, what i saw was a flaw in the system, i'd fist em, make him drop back, and make him piss'd, then,
introduce him to the game, and have him introduce his name,
"Hi my name is Gary, ima fuckin fairy, ima queer from ohio, its iight though, look at my eyes, yo, im serious", shit he's delerious,
quick to spit shit from his mouth like he furious,
but im spit'n fire, cuz my lyrics are hot,
quick to retire? fuck no, im not
oh shit, you seen my raps in clearance?
i thought yours where there first to make an appearance,
yea, your shits good, for a poetry contest,
but we freesytle'n, so get hood, n get in the real contest,
go ahead, and keep your rhyme scheme u learned back in class,
you only passed because u were finger-fuckin the teachers' ass,
you think you came up wit a cleaver style to battle me now,
but in reality, yo shit was so juvenile, its lame to the game, how?
cuz i drop'd a bomb on your style, look at me, wow
CaSs FTW,
this b*tch is El Fin.
 
lol i cant read that, i made out queer and poetry contest, Which means from reading that word several times...your a homophobe, Your jealous of my sites popularity, and lol your form delievers no punch, i can barley stomach to see so much slang.
So i guess its safe to say you pwn yourself.
on that note. plus u needed to go elementary school on my name lol, fuckin 5 year olds rhyme that shit with my name. You forgot that if you drop the "y" it spells gay, figured a homophobe would notice that

On that note.

Let me get retarted for you cass.

I be slippin da water az if you has a daughter and i be allz up in dat azz.
i be's ridin' on dat slang cuz u knows its my thang cuz my mutha fuckin name is cass.
You ask if i wuz dropped az a baby, i only answer maybe cause im the illist piece of trash on the net.
Can you read what i comes back wit, My spellin be da shit,
hurry now and place yo betz!
yo.
yo
yo.
here i go.
So i see you visited my site and that it keeps you up at night,
You'll never be as popular as me.
Just one mention of the chasym and your neck starts to spasm
and your balance starts teetering.
Don't get mad because im educated and can still put your rhymes to shame,
i barley have to try, while you strain and you sigh and wish you woulda quit the game.
I'm Gary the fairy straight out of ohio, Flyin higher than youll ever go.
So dont get mad when i make you look bad, You asked for it you know.
I know your mad i got the teacher, and you got the preacher. Thats just the way the ball bounces.
Cause when i spill my rhymes it takes no time and i drop em by the ounces.
I know i can't express myself Monosyllabically enough for you to comprehend,
So ill shorten my rhymes to save you the time to get that dictionary again.
you say you drop bombs but yet they end in a fizzle.
They shoulda closed this thread to rid us of your drivel.
Do i need a clever ending to make you look stupid as hell?
Nah ill leave that to you, cause when you come back im sure youll do that yourself.
 
CaSs said:
hahah.. finally, someone that says somethin back.. but we have 2 different styles.. yours is more set in form, followin a AABBCCDD pattern, while mine doesnt.. its flows, and has punchlines and metaphors, but isnt set in what u would find in a 'standard' english class, cuz it uses ebonics n slang, which is the hype of Freestyle'n.. mines suited for it, and yours is suited for a poetry contest Lol ...similar to yours.. but yea.. i like mine better, lemme get personal ..

yo Chasym, i went to yo site, despite, what i saw was a flaw in the system, i'd fist em, make him drop back, and make him piss'd, then,
introduce him to the game, and have him introduce his name,
"Hi my name is Gary, ima fuckin fairy, ima queer from ohio, its iight though, look at my eyes, yo, im serious", shit he's delerious,
quick to spit shit from his mouth like he furious,
but im spit'n fire, cuz my lyrics are hot,
quick to retire? fuck no, im not
oh shit, you seen my raps in clearance?
i thought yours where there first to make an appearance,
yea, your shits good, for a poetry contest,
but we freesytle'n, so get hood, n get in the real contest,
go ahead, and keep your rhyme scheme u learned back in class,
you only passed because u were finger-fuckin the teachers' ass,
you think you came up wit a cleaver style to battle me now,
but in reality, yo shit was so juvenile, its lame to the game, how?
cuz i drop'd a bomb on your style, look at me, wow
CaSs FTW,
this b*tch is El Fin.
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Damn son, you got somes words on joo ass
Dropping like a fucking ton, yet I gotta pass
I see you know how to make the flame, and diss everything he say
'Cause you believe you that you came, saw, and conquered all day
But fuck that shit, 'cause I ain't the one
Who is gonna take the hit, for falling for those dumb ass rhymes,
It's like I'm seeing double, lines and crimes, all in the same verse
I guess I'm gonna turn your shit to rubble, 'cause you're just getting worse and worse
You act like you know all the moves, and know how to say the right word
Son, you got no grooves, 'cause your shit is fucking ubsurd
You're giving freestylin a bad name, using the same shit more than once
Just sit the fuck down and stay in shame, for you are a fucking dunce
I don't care what you think about me, 'cause I could own you anyday
And I dare you to see, what poetry really can be
'Cause believe it or not, raps are all fucking poetry, you're fucking face is hearsay
Rewind it, back it up, let's replay the look on your dumbass face,
Look at them teeth grindin, look at his mouth saggin, damn I'd pay to watch this shit
I guess you don't know any words, that are above the first grade vocabulary
'Cause you think they are for nerds, while true MC's are dishing the dictionary
Playing pictionary with your sad ass, representing a poor defense
Just like the walls of Instanbul, doing it all until they fuckin regressed
Shit, you ain't worth teaching history too, 'cause you're too fucking ignorant
So damn it take hint 'cause we've shown you the clue, so quit reaching
For the top seat, 'cause son, you will get beat. :spiteful:
 
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Chasym said:
lol i cant read that, i made out queer and poetry contest, Which means from reading that word several times...your a homophobe, Your jealous of my sites popularity, and lol your form delievers no punch, i can barley stomach to see so much slang.
So i guess its safe to say you pwn yourself.
on that note. plus u needed to go elementary school on my name lol, fuckin 5 year olds rhyme that shit with my name. You forgot that if you drop the "y" it spells gay, figured a homophobe would notice that

On that note.

Let me get retarted for you cass.

I be slippin da water az if you has a daughter and i be allz up in dat azz.
i be's ridin' on dat slang cuz u knows its my thang cuz my mutha fuckin name is cass.
You ask if i wuz dropped az a baby, i only answer maybe cause im the illist piece of trash on the net.
Can you read what i comes back wit, My spellin be da shit,
hurry now and place yo betz!
yo.
yo
yo.
here i go.
So i see you visited my site and that it keeps you up at night,
You'll never be as popular as me.
Just one mention of the chasym and your neck starts to spasm
and your balance starts teetering.
Don't get mad because im educated and can still put your rhymes to shame,
i barley have to try, while you strain and you sigh and wish you woulda quit the game.
I'm Gary the fairy straight out of ohio, Flyin higher than youll ever go.
So dont get mad when i make you look bad, You asked for it you know.
I know your mad i got the teacher, and you got the preacher. Thats just the way the ball bounces.
Cause when i spill my rhymes it takes no time and i drop em by the ounces.
I know i can't express myself Monosyllabically enough for you to comprehend,
So ill shorten my rhymes to save you the time to get that dictionary again.
you say you drop bombs but yet they end in a fizzle.
They shoulda closed this thread to rid us of your drivel.
Do i need a clever ending to make you look stupid as hell?
Nah ill leave that to you, cause when you come back im sure youll do that yourself.
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if sayin 'queer' once per freestyle, is several times,by all means, i guess i must b scared of homo's huh? yea, there's alot of slang, but thats how a freestyle works, we aint doin a poetical battle, u might b.. guess my lyrics got u retarded, n confused, cuz the threads labeled freestyle, not English Class 101

So, on that note,

by all means, go ahead n get retarded,

You cant understand my rhymes, it happens all of the time man,
thats no suprise, when i rise, it's your demise man,
simple and plain, the name of the game,
throwin dirt on my name, jealous cause he's got to work on how to flame
Yea I saw your site to see what the hype was about,
like i though it was nothin, i dont know what ya talkin bout,
from what i saw, that shit was degrading,
i dont see why u keep parading, like you won,
your prolly the only one who think yours shits tight,
but thats somethin i expected from you, am i right?
u should't be respected,lemme fix your rhymes, and have em corrected,
you know im the real Emcee, and thats a fact,
written'n somethin like that should get you smacked,
somethin as lame as yo raps, fuck that,
i'll just smack back wit my raps, its a methodology fix niggas,
so i'll come back wit my college degree, and six figures,
so keep your english class rhyme scheme, and keep tryin me,
come back wit a rhyme theme, then come find me,
cuz right now yo waste'n my time, and dats a crime,
while im rollin up this dime, and gettin crunk wit it,
i dont know what u think yo sites the shit, or even think its a hit,
i took one look at it and said what the fuck, just quit,
you think your raps are the shit,
with words u think that'll make me throw a fit,
i'll never be as popular as you? thats true,
i dont wanna be king of the nerds, and yo fuckn lil crew,
you say i need to step up my rhymes wit a dictionary,
yo do i need to paint my verbs like in pictionary?
your to egotistical, you think your shits all mystical,
i can sound educated to, just copy n paste,
there ya go, just readin yo shits a waste,
cuz i created the game, never quittin,
keep throwin lyrics at ya, just keep spitn as it's writtin,
all it requires is a lil thought, throw it down on the spot while u rot,
come on think, i know your not,you spit the same shit as last time,
nothin new, why dont you get a clue, i can do the same shit too
you aint ever gonna be as good as me, come on lets see?
i'll step and let you throw down your plea,
i know its gonna be some shity ass remark, right from the start,
but go ahead n try to please the crowd, come on, yell it loud
be proud mothua fucker, cuz no one else gonna like it
talkin all that slick shit, the same way these bitches do
only if they know, what your weakness is I have none
thought I wouldn't have that ass done? Fooled you niggaz, im out, i'll be back for the next bout.

EDIT*lol Tor, i'll come back at you ina sec
 
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Yo son this thread is fucking gay yo son yo yo
Spit ill rhymes smoke crack fuck hoes word son yo yo yo
 
lol did u go study the past few days before replyin with that trash!? lmao!
u say i didnt win? the many messages ive recieved would say i pwnd you. And if im king of the nerds, shouldnt you be bowing by now?
i beat ya from post one, all done now.
you can have your thread back n battle yourself over your scatterbrained slang.
 
I actually did this couple years back-- was suggested by someone that was helping me with creative writing. Fun times. Interesting Vent-- hardly something that I normally would write.. but.. eh. All in fun-- a bit cliche. Doubt I could freestyle now though.

You sign me up fo dis' here novice 'bout.// So where dem 20 minimum bars you's 'pose to spit out?// Imma add in `this` filler just to make you sulk and pout.// If it's to much for ya, you could always jus' bow out.//


See I got you sittin' over there strainin'.// What's up wit' dis' shyt you be proclaimin'?// Confusin' me wit' some dumb ass tramp.// But it's alright, 'cus Imma send you back to boot camp.//


If ya lucky, they just might teach ya to be lyrical-fire fighter.// But it ain't ya gurl's fault, my shyt's gunna be tighter.//


Wha.. Wha... You still suckin' on dat guy's dick?// You's fixin'ta get reamed like the corner trick.//


Treat ya like an arcade game in da P.J.'s, found broken.// I'll kick ya dead in da head, wont need no token.//


And Look, you called me out fo dis' lil' battle debute.// But, now I had to embaress you in front of tha (edited).//


It's coo' I see why you didn't want this to be an analyitical review.// Your repetitive lines would've had 'em all callin' deja vu.//


I hope next time, ya gotta a collaboration handy.// Fo dis' last line, is only to let ya know... Rumerz true, I do taste like candy.//
 
yes agreed fuck rap! Hybrid is a different story, since thats rock and rap.
But cant spell crap without rap!
 
Chasym said:
yes agreed fuck rap! Hybrid is a different story, since thats rock and rap.
But cant spell crap without rap!
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Hybrid = Alternative. Hybrid is a cross between rock and roll and rap, creating a similar essence to hip-hop. Linkin Park (i.e) created a Hybrid CD, "Hybrid Theory", in which incorporated rap into their alternative lyrics.

By the way, Alternative is not a specific genre. Atlernative means that it isn't a specific genre. So, Alternative Rock (i.e) means that it is an undecided type of rock and roll.
 
Chasym said:
lol did u go study the past few days before replyin with that trash!? lmao!
u say i didnt win? the many messages ive recieved would say i pwnd you. And if im king of the nerds, shouldnt you be bowing by now?
i beat ya from post one, all done now.
you can have your thread back n battle yourself over your scatterbrained slang.
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hey do you hear that? its the sound of someone back out.. the sweet sounds of someone quiting.. nah i didn study for that.. i just steped it, down, a level to be wit you.. your shits clever n wity but my shit just tears you up.. and what u think im a nerd? i think thats a weak ass come back.. i dug up dirt from your site.. playin wit your video cam, makin shit ass videos only u n ya friends think are funny.. haha what? your funny kid.. and im sure u have those messages where i pwnd.. uh huh right.. lemme skeet on those while you write em up to yaself to make ya feel better.. lol

so, on that note, of puttin this kid six feet under,

told ya i was the king, put that clown down like he was nothin,
he was goin around pretendin he was somethin,
i know he gonna come back, like a baby born addicted to crack,
get him powdered every hour from my stacks, like diaper rashes,
think about it? you get it this time, it comes to you like car crashes,
you gonna come back wit any rhymes? i got two passes,
to the show where i blow you outta the water
and have to pull out that pistol,
stop contimplating, pull the trigger,
im the cure for consitpation, i scare the shit outta niggas,
want me to get rediculous, your shits conspicuous, your fake,
if he try me, i'll strike him down lyrically,
i dont need my gats for this one, seriously,
listen to this..
your pissed with a mad face off, tough titty,
if we stuffed the same slut, you couldnt fuck wit me,
my dicks like my piece, i come from a bad city,
haha.. see? i do whatever i want,
i fuckin flaunt, and throw my taunts around,
i throw stones at lyrics, and rock rhymes,
i get mean cuz im wild,
so when you spit on a mic, make sure its a freestyle
but u wont, cuz you cant get ill, its inevitable that incredible raps spill,
chill, for real, lemme make a deal,
i'll slow down for you so you can get a round,
what? nothin? i throw raps by the pound,
he didn have enough ammo to take me down though,
not enough thoughts, better gimme my crown yo,
check and kill it, Emcee,
fuck wit me, you'll know who win, you'll see,
CaSs, the realist, the illest, im done//
 
Sandria said:
I actually did this couple years back-- was suggested by someone that was helping me with creative writing. Fun times. Interesting Vent-- hardly something that I normally would write.. but.. eh. All in fun-- a bit cliche. Doubt I could freestyle now though.

You sign me up fo dis' here novice 'bout.// So where dem 20 minimum bars you's 'pose to spit out?// Imma add in `this` filler just to make you sulk and pout.// If it's to much for ya, you could always jus' bow out.//


See I got you sittin' over there strainin'.// What's up wit' dis' shyt you be proclaimin'?// Confusin' me wit' some dumb ass tramp.// But it's alright, 'cus Imma send you back to boot camp.//


If ya lucky, they just might teach ya to be lyrical-fire fighter.// But it ain't ya gurl's fault, my shyt's gunna be tighter.//


Wha.. Wha... You still suckin' on dat guy's dick?// You's fixin'ta get reamed like the corner trick.//


Treat ya like an arcade game in da P.J.'s, found broken.// I'll kick ya dead in da head, wont need no token.//


And Look, you called me out fo dis' lil' battle debute.// But, now I had to embaress you in front of tha (edited).//


It's coo' I see why you didn't want this to be an analyitical review.// Your repetitive lines would've had 'em all callin' deja vu.//


I hope next time, ya gotta a collaboration handy.// Fo dis' last line, is only to let ya know... Rumerz true, I do taste like candy.//
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eh not bad Sandria... its fun though right? gets the steam out.. when im freestyle'n, see it get some people up, like chasym, its funny.. they like fuel and ammo, just someone to rhyme at helps..

yea, you signed up, i proclaimed you as 'novice',
dont be like everyone else and rhyme the shit wit hobbits,
who you strain'n? all you gotta do is use your brain'n,
come up wit random thoughts, thats your train'n,
ima go easy on you unlike chasym,
claim'n he could put your neck ina spasm,
who he kiddin? heed my advice,
all you gotta do is think twice,
before steppn up to me,
before i have your leg runnin down wit pee,
he stays silent cuz his words are soft,
you didnt come? im not done jerkin off,
there's nothin you can do end your silent ludacris,
cept stand still, shut up, and look stupid,
they told me to step up my rhymes, my shit was repetative,
iight its time for me to get competative,
but man niggaz out here arent playing fair,
so before the odds are even, i'm leaving them laying there,
and I ain't even playing, believe what I'm saying here,
cause before this shit gets further, your click gets murdered
and found in a hole in the grass, for trying to play that thug role, I'll stomp a mud hole in your ass,
and this Cass, nigga I'm that sick
full Surface nigga, I'm that shit, bitch!

damn.. forgot to say.. Tor.. i gotta throw somethin at you..
 
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