History of Brin Ahlrine

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That was good man, I mean really good. You used alot of detail and elaboration to an extreme extent, giving the story a ravishing feel to it. As I started reading it, I was almost instantly hooked. You explained how each scene rolled by, and how each character percieved situations in narration, along with dialogue. That, right there, is what makes a good story. You did that, and more. You created a large-scaled scenario in which combined narration/dialogue, and the outburst of emotions by the characters. And needless to say, your characters were not one-sided at all. All in all man, that was a hell of a story. Good job :D
 
I'm gonna take a bit of a break from writing while i'm helping to write scripts for a Noizytribe Movie Series. I need to have all my creativity to pour into that. :)
 
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