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Hitaru said:
Chapter 5 is uppers =P tell me what's ya think ^^;

Sorry about the delay with this chapter, school is currently kicking my ass. but guess what! i might be able to use this in one of my assignments! and i got my English teacher reading it XD

edit: also notice how i post at around 1-2amish then complain in the come say hi at work thread about how i'm late to class...there totally isn't a connection there...no sirry
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That's what I think too lmao

Also its Chapter 4 you put up :P love the story though ^^
 
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Thought Besieged was ending :wink:
 
I really should reserve time to read this more >.>

Probably cannot today though, got too much work to do. I can try either tonite or tomorrow though!
 
Awesome job so far Hitaru! It's really cool that you're doing this. :thumbsup:
 
Solan said:
Thought Besieged was ending :wink:
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So did I, honestly I was going to end it....then I looked up Medusa's stats for besieged and it said takes 500 people to kill in besieged after the jaw drop, I was like fuckeries XD so I had to drag it out a bit more lol.


Thank's for all the comments guys ^^, and Trist take your times reading it =P and just don't hate me for making flag and me your brothers XD
 
wow man, i really dont know you and you got me down to the grinning which i do alot in game lol. Thank you for making me such a kick ass NIN and love the attitude you gave her, really close to my personality.
Enough bout me >.>; intersting how the story is developing so far, it seems we are in for more surprises from bad snake lady.
/starts sketching.... i was thinking and JUST thinking, you know those long ass books mostly fantasy and the such. They usually include a sketch or two per chapter, just to help the reader visualize i guess, what is going on in the story.
Do you think maybe we could include that somehow?...sort of like the tribunal how it includes a pic or two of whatever story or background story they wrote for that month...

Personally i think it would be kind of cool, but then again it could just be wishful thinking.
 
Aristarc said:
wow man, i really dont know you and you got me down to the grinning which i do alot in game lol. Thank you for making me such a kick ass NIN and love the attitude you gave her, really close to my personality.
Enough bout me >.>; intersting how the story is developing so far, it seems we are in for more surprises from bad snake lady.
/starts sketching.... i was thinking and JUST thinking, you know those long ass books mostly fantasy and the such. They usually include a sketch or two per chapter, just to help the reader visualize i guess, what is going on in the story.
Do you think maybe we could include that somehow?...sort of like the tribunal how it includes a pic or two of whatever story or background story they wrote for that month...

Personally i think it would be kind of cool, but then again it could just be wishful thinking.
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It does sound cool, but my drawing skills suck shit. If anyone else doesn't mind doing it, I have no objections ^^. Glad i got your character down right.
 
Yeah I was thinking of doing something like that with PhotoShop, but I don't play so I can't get screens of the places and such.
 
Hitaru said:
It does sound cool, but my drawing skills suck shit. If anyone else doesn't mind doing it, I have no objections ^^. Glad i got your character down right.
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Well there is a link at the bottom of my sig, click it check it out and let me know wht you think, id be more than happy to do some pics for the story.
 
Aristarc, you're really good ^^, it's really entirely up to you if you'd like to do things for the story, i'm sure everyone would appreciate it, coming from such a talented artist
 
Haha, I finally read this.

Great job Hitaru, you actually got my speech style down fairly well.

I do swear a lot when fighting >.>
 
Tristam Green said:
Haha, I finally read this.

Great job Hitaru, you actually got my speech style down fairly well.

I do swear a lot when fighting >.>
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Glad ya liked it ^^; also since I am still in one piece you didn't mind the whole brother thing XD
 
Hitaru said:
Glad ya liked it ^^; also since I am still in one piece you didn't mind the whole brother thing XD
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Nope, and I like that you made me the older brother. I specifically picked the size and hairstyle of Tarutaru I did because I wanted to look like an old Tarutaru, rather than the cute and playful ones you always see.

Think Autobot "Ratchet" except in cute and cuddly format.
 
Cool cool =P

next chapter should and that's a big should have besieged finished...it all depends on the length of the chapter lol.
 
Hitaru said:
Aristarc, you're really good ^^, it's really entirely up to you if you'd like to do things for the story, i'm sure everyone would appreciate it, coming from such a talented artist
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Thanks buddy, ill it will be a lil while before they're up, gotta finish some other stuff first. But i am honored and will be glad to help out.
 
i liked the aristarc part
 
I like the fact I'm a mouthy little bitch. =D
 
i thought i did ; ; I posted my info on page 11 and you never answered my question either
 
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