the color of the midnight water (my drawing)

hiya :) long time no see everrone
here are some new ffxi arts


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kaliea

kizaryo and raesily wedding :)

the pld and the drk , its me and alfinia lvling pld and drk :)

a commision for taxero

midna for february calendar

godina for the calendar too
 
After looking through your old pictures versus your new I have to say that I'm definitely impressed with the improvement you're showing. The colors are lovely and it's obvious you've been showing your artwork dedication.

Gorgeous work. <3
 
Narissa said:
After looking through your old pictures versus your new I have to say that I'm definitely impressed with the improvement you're showing. The colors are lovely and it's obvious you've been showing your artwork dedication.

Gorgeous work. <3
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thank you , i have practiced a lot in the last year cuz i needed to improve for university .
 
Very nice~!
 

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working on this little comix , midna and alfnia adventures

this on is : maat fight , part 1 , other panels are otw
 
Was kind of funny, but you need to work on your spelling a little bit too. XD There's a few errors but it was readable anyway. How come your watercolor's line-art seems better than your comic strip's line-art?
 
Ecks said:
Was kind of funny, but you need to work on your spelling a little bit too. XD There's a few errors but it was readable anyway. How come your watercolor's line-art seems better than your comic strip's line-art?
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being french dosent really help writing perfectly in english :(

the strips are made on computer and im not really good with it yet :(
and i work everyday on my watercolor techniques .

noticed that i made it for fun too .

And thank you for your constructive comment :) its that kind of comment that help improvement .

i works on some others comix and you will be happy to know that i do them in the same way i do watercolor
 
Cute comic! Props to you for being brave enough to do water color, that stuff is tough.
 
misi said:
Cute comic! Props to you for being brave enough to do water color, that stuff is tough.
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thank you a lot ^^
in fact watercolor is the only painting i can handle , i CAN do the other kind but after 1 hour of painting i get enough of it and dont finish it .

but ill start university in arts in september , maybe ill get better ^^
 
Very good job Midna! Hoping to see more soon~
 

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here we go , 3 page coming tommorow if everything goes well in rl ,


please tell me where the english is not ok , im french so my english not perfect and i always keep no text version so please tell me that would help
 
I'll um.. correct the spelling and grammar as best I can while still making it sound like you wrote it. ._.; I'll notate my thoughts in parenthesis ( ).


"You forgot this little girl. Maybe I should keep it? It could make a nice lamp." (did you mean, lamp shade?)

"Hey you! Give me back my red hat! It's MINE!!!!" (Not sure if you meant to say Red Mage hat or just red hat, but either way I think your message is understood.)

"This time it's PERSONAL!"
"...And stop tickling me with the feather of my hat from the (?? I don't really know what that says) panel above! Why did the stupid artist put it there.."

"HO! (Ho? o.O?) That old man looks so nice and polite. Try not to hurt him too much, it might cause him a lot of pain in the morning. (Kind of hard to interpret just what you meant, I think I got it close) Be nice with him, okay?" (Might sound better with "Be gentle with him, okay?")

"I'll teach that old man to never take a Red Mage's hat! This time I won't be nice."

(alternatively you could say something like "I'll show that old man! He'll never want to take a Red Mage's hat again! This time I won't go easy on him.." which gets across the same kind of message I think you were aiming for, granted it's also a little more wordy.)
 
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thank you so much ! thats exacltly the though i had but couldnt express it myself :3


e. Try not to hurt him too much, it might cause him a lot of pain in the morning :

its a reference to maat fight , when you give him a big shot he says that

yes i wanted to mean a lamp shade

i wanted to say red hat

here is the corected version

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Well um, it still needs a little work. ^^;

Take a closer look at the spelling of words that I wrote. For example, Personal only has one 'n'.

And the final panel needs some fixing. It should read: "I'll show that old man. He'll never want to take a red mage hat again!"

Though you wrote 'takes' and forgot to put 'hat' in the line.

There's a few other little English errors, but I think if you just fix those two things it'll be better to read.
 
Ecks said:
Well um, it still needs a little work. ^^;

Take a closer look at the spelling of words that I wrote. For example, Personal only has one 'n'.

And the final panel needs some fixing. It should read: "I'll show that old man. He'll never want to take a red mage hat again!"

Though you wrote 'takes' and forgot to put 'hat' in the line.

There's a few other little English errors, but I think if you just fix those two things it'll be better to read.
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dho ^^; thats what happen when you try to do something fast ...
 
page 3 , beware ! its 13 years old for nudity .


how do i put it in spoilers already ><




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