Theallis the Realm Beyond Sea, Sky, and Land

“You have finally made all of your powers one power,” the galka said weakly.
“You have redeemed your world within this place,” the hume said.
“But do not celebrate, for the words of the dark gods were correct, for we have seen it in their minds,” the galka said.
“The dark one has gathered his army, and he will still need to be defeated before all the lands of light will truly be safe,” the hume added.
“The road to Theallis will open for you, and the lands of light will need your help to defeat the evil one,” the galka said.
“There is more to the prophecy than the redeeming of this realm, and now that is has been redeemed, the Dark Lord Galroth will prepare for your arrival in the lands of Theallis,” the hume said.
“Am I the one destined to defeat Galroth?” Aaleel asked weakly.
“All that is said is that one wields the sword of light will seek to redeem those of their lands, and upon the day of redemption the chosen one will travel to lands yet seen, where the fate of all worlds will be decided,” the hume replied.
“So by your victory or by your death, all things will now be decided,” the hume added before their bodies began to break in spheres of white light.
“Wait, how do we get to Theallis?” Aaleel asked holding out her hand.
“The way will reveal itself to you when you are truly ready,” the hume said, as the two bodies passed shattered in spheres of light and floated away.
“What is going on,” Kerowynn said, as the wind within the aery became violent, and began to swirl about. It created a swirling vortex of wind, and through it the company could see the image of the Dragon’s Aery of their land.
“Help Aaleel,” Duncanrun said, as Aaleel leaned heavily on Nikoloi and Jimm, as they slowly walked back towards their world. Aaleel could not believe it true as her feet stepped upon the grass of the Dragon’s Aery, and the looked around at the green trees, and rolling grass. The vortex slammed shut as the last of the Elite stepped back into Vana’diel, and all the Elite collapsed upon the ground, exhausted from their ordeal in the dark realm.
“I cannot believe that it is over,” Kerowynn said.
“Nor can I,” Nikoloi replied.
“What shall we do until we are shown the way to Theallis?” Jimm asked.
“You all will return to the Guild of the Elite, but there are things that I must do, questions that I must have answered,” Aaleel said.
“What are those Aal?” Sanborn asked.
“I have many questions about this prophecy and this blade, and there is only one place that I will find the answers I seek,” she replied.
“You seek to return to the Far East, and seek answers in the temple,” Unphazed said, as Aaleel nodded her head.
“That is not a wise idea Aal, for if what the priests said is true, I think it best that you are kept hidden and safe until the way to Theallis is shown to us,” Nocturnus said.
“I will not hide Nocturnus,” Aaleel snapped back.
“Nor will I travel to the new lands not knowing why after trusting those of Theallis enough to accept this task, that so much was intentionally hidden from me,” she added standing to her feet.
“I will not walk blindly once again,” Aaleel said looking upon the blade of Syuji.
“Then at least let us come with you,” Nocturnus said.
“No, I must do this alone, you will remain at the guild,” she replied.
“You do not have a choice Aaleel, we are coming with you, or you are not going,” Nocturnus said, as Aaleel sighed loudly.
“Very well then,” she said.
“Good, now shall we return to Bastok to recover?” Nikoloi asked, as the mages began to cast spells of teleportation, and the company of the Elite disappeared.
 
lol she should write it in seasons. Leave some big cliffhanger for the "season finale", then make you all wait till fall or something for the story to resume. Then post once a week after that lol.
 
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Least that'll give Aal plenty of time to write out the story. She could go on for like 5-6 seasons too lol.
 
:D I was soooooo heroic in that part :D you captured my essance almost perfectly... cept after we exited i would proably be bitching that i my sexy Adaman armor's all sinnged and half desintigrated.. :P

But other than that wow Aal you havea gift for story telling
 
Sorrowfulturnip said:
lol she should write it in seasons. Leave some big cliffhanger for the "season finally", then make you all wait till fall or something for the story to resume. Then post once a week after that lol.
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season finale? lol go /wrists yourself darky!

i havent read the new edition yet but im sure its really good :)
 
Nikoloi said:
season finale? lol go /wrists yourself darky!

i havent read the new edition yet but im sure its really good :)
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Pssh, you know what I meant!! Besides, I fixed it now. Easy as that. No need to give in to /wrist so easily like someone I know whos name I won't mention. I'll just say his initials are.....Nikoloi!
 
Chapter IX – Journey Home to the Far East

Aaleel did not sleep long, for she wanted to arise while all of the Elite were still sleeping. She had gathered her pack the night before, and though she had still not recovered all her strength, she cast a spell of invisibility, and snuck out of the guild.
“I knew that you would not allow the others to accompany you,” Unphazed said, as he sat upon the roof of the guild above the door.
“We know you too well Aaleel,” Zodiaque said, as she sat beside her brother.
“Go back to bed you two,” Aaleel said, as Unphazed leapt from the roof of the guild.
“If you will not allow the rest of the guild to protect you, at least let Zod and I come with you,” Unphazed said, as Aaleel sighed, and nodded her head.
“It’s not like you are going to let me leave without you anyway,” Aaleel said smiling.
“It seems that you know us well too,” Zodiaque said climbing down from the roof.
“Duncanrun went into South Gustaberg to practice his summoning magic, we told him that we would get him if we discovered you seeking the lands of the Far East alone,” Unphazed said, as Aaleel smiled.
“Then let us go get him, and depart for Norg,” Aaleel said, as the three set off into the Bastok Markets towards the gates to Gustaberg.

It had been sometime since Aaleel had traveled to Norg, but not nearly as long as it had been since she had seen the lands of the Far East. She looked about the Sea Serpent’s Grotto and wondered why all things connected to the Far East kept themselves so secluded from the rest of the world. Then she thought that it may have been that very seclusion that kept her out of the eyes of the dark powers until she was ready to walk her path. But who knew about the power hidden within her katana, or the path it would lead her upon? Did her teacher know? Did any of the other students know, was one a priest from Theallis keeping a close eye on her?
“Aal, going over all the questions in your head is not going to have them answered more quickly,” Zodiaque said, as Aaleel looked to her.
“I know, I just cannot help but think that someone in the temple had to know about all of this,” Aaleel said.
“If Master Dun does not know, I cannot think of anyone else who would,” Unphazed said.
“But there have been many generations of teachers at Kikanku-Sho Temple, so I do not know if it is possible for our master to be a priest of Theallis,” he added.
“Maybe those in Theallis did nothing more than allow the events of this world to transpire on their own, rather than seek to control the lives of those in our world,” Duncanrun said.
“They have at all times just shown us the path and tested us when we felt we were ready to face the challenges, maybe this time was no different,” he added.
“The fate of our world was never in the balance Dunc,” Aaleel replied.
“It was if all that you have been through has prepared you for what is to come,” he said back, as they began to see the flames and wooden columns that signaled the final path to the entrance to Norg. They walked up the slope past all of the ironshell crabs until they finally saw the gates of Norg. They walked into the first of the large caverns that made up the city, and Aaleel smiled as she looked about the city she had not seen in some time.

“I need to go speak with Gilgamesh, I will meet you on the dock when the ship to Isin-Til arrives,” Aaleel said, as she walked towards the stairs that led to the upper levels. She walked up the stairs and down the hall to an oak door. There was a guard outside the door, but he allowed Aaleel to pass into the quarters of Norg’s leader.
“Ah Aaleel, it has been a long time,” Gilgamesh said standing from his desk.
“Too long,” Aaleel said, as she shook his hand.
“What brings you to Norg?”
“I am waiting for the boat to Isin-Til, and I thought that I would come and see you,” Aaleel said, as Gilgamesh looked at her.
“Is that so?” He asked as he walked from his desk and poured two cups of tea. Aaleel bowed her head, as he handed her one of the cups.
“It seems as though you have more of a purpose in your visit then merely a visit to pass the time,” he said, as he smiled and sipped his tea.
“What has really brought you to my door?” He asked setting his cup on the table.
“What do you remember of my parents,” Aaleel asked, as Gilgamesh leaned back in his chair.
“I do not remember much of your father Aaleel,” he said stroking his white beard with his hand.
“In fact, I do not recall ever meeting your father at all, and the day your mother brought you here to travel to the Far East is the only time I recall seeing her,” he added.
“That is impossible, for my father was a Ninja, and the only way to the lands of the Far East is from Norg,” Aaleel said.
“It is strange, but perhaps your father trained in the Far East in times before I became leader of this city,” Gilgamesh said.
“My father was not that old when he left this world, I do not think that possible,” Aaleel said.
“I am sorry that I cannot remember much about your parents Aaleel, I am sorry,” he said sympathetically as Aaleel sighed loudly, and dropped her head.
“Then can you tell me anything about this blade,” Aaleel said, as she drew Syuji, and brought its blade to light.
“I can say that I have never seen anything like that before in my time in this world,” he said getting up from his desk, and walking over to Aaleel to look upon the blade.
“My father gave it to me,” she said.
“The right path is my path,” he read upon the blade.
“I regret to say that I have no answers regarding this blade either, I am truly sorry,” he said looking sadly at her.
“Maybe you will find the answers you seek at Kikanku-Sho Temple,” he said, as Aaleel sat her cup on the table, and rose from the chair.
“I thank you for time, and I promise that this much time will not pass before my next visit to Norg,” Aaleel said, as Gilgamesh bowed his head, and returned to his chair. Aaleel walked out of the office, and made her way to the dock where the others were waiting for her.
 
“Hey Aal, did Gilgamesh have any answers for you?” Zodiaque asked, as Aaleel shook her head, and say upon the dock.
“He does not even remember my father coming to Norg once,” Aaleel said looking out over the water, where she began to see the shadow of the large cutter that travels the waters of the sea between Norg and the city of Isin-Til in the Far East. Aaleel stood to her feet, and waiting in the blowing wind, as the cutter drew nearer and nearer the dock where the group was waiting. Aaleel toed the end of the dock anxiously as the boat settled against the dock. They made their way into the lower levels of the ship where the quarters were. They settled into four rooms next to each other along the left side of the hallway, and prepared for the long trip to Isin-Til.
“I will see you all in the morning,” Aaleel said, as she entered her room, and rested upon the bed to sleep.

Aaleel awoke in the middle of the night for something was amiss in her mind. She walked out into the torch lit hallway, and made her way to the deck of the ship hoping that the ocean air would clear her head. She walked slowly out onto the deck and looked upon the stars in the night sky, and the shadows of the sea animals passing by the ship. She turned to a light behind her, and at first she thought that one of the stars had fallen from the sky onto the deck of the ship.
“You have come far Aaleel,” she heard as the light became a vision of Yuriel.
“Yuriel,” Aaleel said not knowing what to think of the person who had started her upon her current path, but held so much from her.
“Why do you look at me in such a way Aaleel?” Yuriel asked her.
“What way is that Yuriel?”
“Like you do not trust me,” Yuriel replied.
“Should I?”
“You have held so much from, the prophecy, this katana,” Aaleel said shaking her head, and looking at the katana.
“Was Syuji forged in Theallis?” She asked bluntly.
“Yes, and in that forging it was deemed that the blade could never serve the hand of darkness, or ever be used for evil purpose,” Yuriel replied.
“Which is why the true power of the blade could not be unlocked until a person proved themselves pure, and truly worthy of it,” she added.
“A person whose path was the right path,” Aaleel said reading the blade.
“Correct.”
“So the events of my life have not only prepared me for this moment but tested me for this katana as well?”
“If that is the way you wish to look at it,” Yuriel said.
“What is that supposed to mean?”
“We do not seek to interfere in your lives, only set goals before you, and let you aspire to achieve them when you feel you are ready,” Yuriel replied.
“But you are a special case Aaleel, for your goal is the salvation of all our worlds as we know them, but yet and still we did not want to push you upon the path before we thought you were ready, and you proved to be all the visions of Grand High Priest Zoron said you would be,” she added.
“What do you know of my father, my family?” Aaleel asked.
“All those things will soon be answered Aaleel, for you will discover much about yourself in the Far East.”
“WHY CAN YOU NOT TELL ME?” Aaleel screamed angrily.
“It is not my place to tell you,” Yuriel said compassionately.
“WHY NOT?”
“You will understand in time Aaleel, but for now seek the answers you will in the Far East,” Yuriel said.
“Once you have found what you will in the Far East, if you still wish to, come to the place where all the worlds meet, and the way to Theallis will open for you,” Yuriel said, as the light of her vision began to diminish.
“Wait, what do you mean?” Aaleel yelled as the vision disappeared. Aaleel remained on the deck for many moments holding onto the faint hope that the vision of Yuriel would return and answer her questions. Once she realized that Yuriel was not returning, she returned to her quarters, but she did not return to sleep, instead she spent the rest of the night meditating on Yuriel’s words
 
She had been upon her bed for two hours as she could tell, when Unphazed knocked on the door, and told her that they were nearing Isin-Til. She opened her eyes and looked out of the window, where she saw the sun peeking out over the horizon of the water. She gathered her things, and walked to the deck where she saw the shadows of islands of the Far East through the thick morning mist. She waited anxiously as the cutter pulled against the dock, and she looked out upon the city of Isin-Til.

Isin-Til like all the cities and lands of the Far East was settled in a time all its own, with architecture matched by no other place in all of Vana’diel. The lands were of nature and even the cities where filled with gardens and trees of the lands beyond the walls, where one at any time could find the peace and tranquility of nature. Aaleel’s mind was immediately filled with memories of the rolling green fields full of wildflowers, majestic trees, rolling rivers, and wide valleys. There was a peaceful serenity everywhere, and Aaleel missed greatly meditating among the peacefulness, under the blooming blossoms upon many of the trees. She had only found one place in the main lands that was even a fraction as serene as the lands of the Far East, and that was Lufaise Meadows.

There were many chocoboo pulling carts about the city, and the group took one of the carts to the back of the city where the chocoboo stables were. There was an older woman standing in front of the large stable cooking rice and other food.
“I love coming to Myrial’s chocoboo stables, she feeds you, and rents you the fastest chocoboo I’ve ever seen,” Aaleel said smiling, as she walked up to the Myrial.
“Aaleel, it has been ages,” Myrial said, setting down her spoon, and walking over to give Aaleel a warm hug.
“I am sorry that is has been so long since my last visit,” Aaleel said smiling.
“But it seems that you still have the most successful chocoboo stables in the city,” she added.
“It will soon be my daughter’s business,” Myrial said.
“You are still going to do the cooking?” Aaleel asked, as Myrial nodded her head.
“So what has brought you back to Isin-Til?” Myrial asked, as she began preparing plates of food for the four Elite.
“I wish to visit the temple and ask Master Dun of my family since I know so little of them,” Aaleel replied.
“You were so young to first time you arrived here,” Myrial said shaking her head.
“I remember feeding you and your mother before she took you to the temple to begin your training,” Myrial said.
“Do you remember anything of my father?”
“I never recall meeting your father,” she replied.
“I am beginning to wonder if he ever existed at all,” Aaleel said sadly, before she ate some of her food.
“I have one memory of him, and one only, and that is the day that he bestowed this katana upon me,” she added.
“I am sorry that I cannot be of more help,” Myrial said.
“It is ok Myrial,” Aaleel replied.
“I will do my part by speeding you on your way to the temple,” Myrial said.
“Kya, Kya,” she yelled, before a young girl came running around the side of the stables.
“Look who has come back,” Myrial said as Kya’s eyes brightened and she ran to give Aaleel a hug.
“You have grown a lot since I last saw you Kya,” Aaleel said smiling.
“I have been practicing what you taught me, and I still wear the bracelet that you brought me from the temple,” she said pulling up her sleeve.
“I am honored,” Aaleel said bowing her head.
“They are short on time Kya, ready four of our fastest chocoboo,” Myrial said, as Kya nodded her head, and ran back to the stables. Aaleel and the others finished the food Myrial had prepared for them, which was welcomed after the food they had received on the trip over. They finished their food, and looked to the exit of the city where Kya had prepared the four chocoboo. Aaleel stood from the table, and reached into her pouch for gil to pay Myrial, who just held out her hand and shook her head.
“Your money is not good here Aaleel, I only hope that you find the answers you seek at the temple,” Myrial said.
“And that this much time does not pass before you return here again,” she added.
“You have my thanks,” Aaleel said bowing her head.
“And it will not,” she added, as she and the others took their chocoboo from Kya, and trotted to the gates.
“The weather has changed since I last visited,” Aaleel said as she held up her hand to shield her face from the strong winds.
“Yes, it seems that the past few days the skies have remained gray, and the winds strong,” Kya said.
 
“Watch over your mother, and I will see you upon my next visit,” Aaleel said, as she waved to Kya, and the party departed the gates of Isin-Til. They sprang quickly into the fields of Suing-nal, which lied behind the city, and they followed the main path through the tall grass, wildflowers, and small trees all bearing white blossoms, trimmed in pink. The air was filled with petals from the stiff winds, as they entered a dense green forest, where they jumped onto the main path, and watched as white deer, native only to the Far East leapt in and out of the trees. They traveled through the forest for some time before they emerged into a large valley, which was split by a wide flowing river. They stopped along side the river and allowed their chocoboo to drink of the refreshing water.

“If we follow the river through the valley we will reach the Tiran-San valley and the Golden Forest of Ala-nil,” Aaleel said happily.
“White skinned trees with golden leaves, and flower,” she added.
“Un has told me about before, I cannot wait to see it,” Zodiaque said, as they pulled their chocoboo from the river, and continued on through the valley.
“This land holds such beauty, I wonder why no one visits it,” Zodiaque said, as they rode through the valley.
“These lands are not for visiting Zod, if you are here, you are a child of these lands by birth or study,” Aaleel said.
They continued through the valley until the river bent and crossed their path. There was a stone bridge crossing the river, and the party trotted slowly over it before they crossed a small field and finally entered the hill filled valley of Tiran-San. They rode through the valley for about an hour before they climbed a steep hill, and upon the precipice they saw a sea of golden tree tops, and in the center upon a plateau rested the temple of Kikanku-Sho.

“It looks like its floating on a sea of tree tops,” Zodiaque said.
“That is why the name of the temple means school upon the golden waves in the language of the main lands,” Aaleel said.
“The clouds are dark above the temple, a storm is coming,” Duncanrun said, as the wind blew strongly across them.
“This is not the weather of this land, something dark has soiled the serenity of this land,” Aaleel said looking to Unphazed who nodded his head.
“We have to hurry to the temple,” Unphazed said, as they bounded down the hill towards the forest. There were golden petals all about the path, which kicked up under the steps of the chocoboo, as they rode in haste along the path to the temple. They began to see the end of the tunnel created by the boughs of the trees, and there was the beginning of a large set of stone stairs. Aaleel sped up ahead of the others, but suddenly she sensed something to her right, as a sphere dark energy emerged from the boughs of the trees. Aaleel leapt from her chocoboo just as the energy struck it, and it fell to the ground. Aaleel looked upon the chocoboo as the others stopped.
“What has happened Aal,” Zodiaque asked.
“This chocoboo has had some of its life drained, there is a dark knight about us,” Aaleel said, as she drew her katana and her chakram. She closed her eyes, and focused about the sounds about her, listening to one that was not of nature, and as she heard the sound of a bough cracked from unnatural weight, she threw her chakram into the boughs where she heard the sound of her chakram striking upon metal.

“I know that you are there, show yourself, for you have lost the element of surprise,” Aaleel said, as she caught her chakram, and returned it to her back. She looked to the others who dismounted their chocoboo, and then to the boughs of the trees which began to sway as a form leapt from them holding a great sword above its head. Aaleel rolled out of the way of the first strike and blocked the second with her katana.
“A fomor,” Aaleel said, as she looked at her enemy, blank of face with only burning red eyes.
“Why have you left the despair of your dungeons?” Aaleel asked, as she parried another of the enemy’s blows.
“You assume much, for who is to say we are from your world at all,” the enemy said slashing at Aaleel, who leapt to the air. But as she did the boughs moved again, and another form leapt from the trees.
“Aaleel,” Unphazed yelled as he leapt to the air and kicked the second form to the ground where it stood holding a long tachi.
“This is only the beginning,” the dark knight said as it came after Aaleel, and Unphazed engaged the Samurai. Aaleel had grown so accustomed to fighting beasts, that fighting another warrior was strange to her. She called forth her images as the dark knight swung through one of them but only found the blinding powder of Kurayami.
“Doton,” Aaleel yelled as slabs of stone swirled around the fiend, and slammed together about him, forcing him to his knees. Aaleel moved in quickly upon him, and before he could raise his sword she called upon the weapon skill of Blade: Ku to finish her foe. She turned to Unphazed who was finishing off his foe along with Fenrir who Duncanrun had sent into the fray to help.

“Come we must reach the temple gates,” Aaleel said as they sprinted to the stone stairs and climbed them towards the temple, which now had a whirlpool of darkness swirling in the clouds above it. They reached the gates of the temple, which were damaged and broken open, and there they saw students of the school locked in combat with some of the same dark creatures they had fought within the Golden Forest.
“Where is Master Dun?” Aaleel asked one of the students, who told her that he was still inside.
“Help them as best you can, I am going to see about Master Dun,” Aaleel said, as she broke away from the others.
“I am coming with you Aaleel,” Zodiaque said, as she followed Aaleel into the temple. Aaleel stepped slowly into the temple, and started across the wooden floor towards the inner areas of the temple.
“Aaleel what is going on?”
“Be quiet Zod,” Aaleel replied pulling her finger to her lips.
“Who are these warriors?”
“Zodiaque be quiet, or go back outside,” Aaleel said more bluntly.
“Ok, sorry,” Zodiaque said, as Aaleel began to slide along the wall, she grew up inside the temple, and she knew every sound that was out of place, including the stretching of a bow, as an arrow was being drawn back upon the string. She leapt from behind one of the pillars and slung her chakram into the shadows of the ceiling, and there was a loud crack before a bow fell from the darkness to the temple floor. It was followed by a dark form leaping upon Aaleel with axe drawn. Aaleel parried the blow of the axe with one of her katana, and slashed through her foe’s chest with the other. She forced the axe from its hand, and turned to plunge her katana into its stomach. She pushed it in farther and twisted it before she laid the body softly to the floor so not to make much noise, and she waved for Zodiaque to come. They made their way slowly through the halls of the temple until they began to hear the sounds of combat, and they came around a corner to a see the bodies of two enemies, and one student upon the floor, as a small ninja fought a dark warrior. Aaleel could tell that the student was tired and overmatched, as the warrior swung mightily with it great axe, and knocked the ninja to the floor. Aaleel darted across the floor, and caught the swing of the great axe upon both her katana.
“Katon,” she said, as there was an explosion of fire, and the dark warrior flew through the air onto its back. It rolled upon the ground to smother the flames, as Aaleel went quickly upon it, and drove Syuji through its chest. She turned and ran to back to the ninja, who was only a young girl.
“Kaede,” Aaleel said, as she helped the young ninja to her feet.
“Why is Master Dun?’ Aaleel asked.
“He is in our main training room by the garden,” Kaede said, as she pointed down the hallway.
“This way,” Aaleel said, as they moved quickly down the halls of the temple until the reached a door that was being guarded by a small tarutaru, whose red eyes shown from the shadows of its cloak.

“You cannot enter this place, for our master has not finished asking his questions of this school's leader,” the tarutaru said holding its staff in front of it.
“You will stand aside or die,” Aaleel said angrily, as she and Kaede stepped forward, and Zodiaque stayed back to support them.
“You are in no position to demand anything Ninja, for you have no inkling of who holds the true power here,” the tarutaru said, as strands of darkness hopped around it body before the seal of the summoner appeared on the floor, and a grey Fenrir leapt in front of them.
“I will smite you with the ultimate power of this beast, Dark Howling Moon,” the tarutaru said, and in an instant the hallway exploded in dark energy as shards of darkness crashed down upon them. Aaleel raised Syuji and created what shield she could before the waves of darkness consumed them all. Aaleel waited until the shards of darkness had passed over, before she lowered her protection, and darted at her foe who assumed all to be dead or dying from its attack. Aaleel dropped to her knee, as she slid past her foe, and clove its head off clean with Syuji. She looked about the hallway, which was burning in dark flames, and her very heart stopped as she saw Zodiaque lying beneath burning wood without movement. She felt great despair that she could not extend her shield to protect her friend, and as she pulled the burning wood off her, she prayed with all she had that she would be ok. She breathed a sigh of relief when she felt breath from her nose, and she knew that all was well.
“Is she ok?” Kaede asked.
“She will be soon, the powers of the white mage will soon heal and revive her, it will just take time,” Aaleel replied.
“Stay with her, I am going to help Master Dun,” Aaleel said, pulling her chakram from her back.
“Take this, and use it if anyone comes around that corner,” Aaleel said handing her chakram to Kaede.
“Aaleel, what is going on, I’m scared?” Kaede asked looking about the hallway.
“I do not know, hopefully if their master is within that room, I will find the answers I seek,” Aaleel answered.
“Is anyone else with you?”
“Unphazed has returned as well, and one other of our friends,” Aaleel said.
“They are aiding the students and teachers outside,” she added.
“I must ask you a favor Kaede,” Aaleel said.
“What is it?”
“Guard my friend until she is well, I am counting on you,” Aaleel said.
“Make your father and your sister proud,” she added smiling, as Kaede nodded her head. Aaleel walked slowly to the door to the training room, which was blown open and in flames. Aaleel stepped into the room, where she saw her Master floating upon the air shackled and bound in rings of darkness, as a form stood at the far side of the room with its back to her. His black cape hung to one side of his armor, which was gray about the torso, and black upon the legs and arms trimmed in gray. His gauntlets were also ringed in gold, and a long ponytail of white hair hung down his back. He held in one hand a long sword, whose curved blade looked as if it had been scorched in fire.
“Who are you, and why have you attacked this temple?” Aaleel yelled, but the form did not turn to her.
“We have meet before Child of the Prophecy, if only in your mind, and your visions, for you have looked into my eyes and seen the darkness that will soon cover all the worlds,” he said turning to her, his face was pale and seemed dead, and his eyes burning red with fire, which Aaleel remembered from her visions upon the mirror before she entered the dark realm.
“GALROTH!!”
 
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You guys have to give me your opinions on the new made up areas. Not full enough, not enough description, too much, whatever, all comments welcome.
 
It's really good Aal, the story is developing nicely imo. Needs more Kero is all! lol :)
 
i havent been caught up with the story with the last couple of additions but i plan on reading it soon. i will post what i think when i finish reading it all :)

but before i read i must suggest one thing.

Kerowynn said:
Needs more Kero is all! lol :)
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please dont take keros advice in anything. youll end up lost and confused.
 
Nikoloi said:
i havent been caught up with the story with the last couple of additions but i plan on reading it soon. i will post what i think when i finish reading it all :)

but before i read i must suggest one thing.



please dont take keros advice in anything. youll end up lost and confused.
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agreed
 
Nikoloi said:
but before i read i must suggest one thing.



please dont take keros advice in anything. youll end up lost and confused.
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Excactly. This story is about the ancient land beyond sea, sky, and land. It is not about Kero's lost adventure. Thats a whole different story in itself.
 
just finished reading up to date and wow this is awesome. you did great job on describing the new areas :) keep up the good work it is getting really intense

i like the part where zody didnt be quiet.. so typical ;)

but i love all of it all the fight scenes and skillchains and the fafhogg fights were awesome :)

i cant wait for me :D
 
Sorrowfulturnip said:
Excactly. This story is about the ancient land beyond sea, sky, and land. It is not about Kero's lost adventure. Thats a whole different story in itself.
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thats like a whole 300 page book
 
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